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Post  Guest on Mon Aug 26, 2013 4:50 am

Name: Candy Cheung
Age: 12 (almost 13)
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Family: Fai and Connie Cheung (parents)
Years in Camp: 0
Brief History: Candy's parents met on a sunny Sunday at the beach. Connie loved the sun and watched the sunrise at the beach alone every day, but on that very special day, there was a man sitting at the beach too. Connie was surprised and walked over. The two started to chat and loved each other. Connie later bore a child, and the child looked so sweet so they named her Candy.
Candy is a small town girl that went to school like other normal kids and did well. She read and wrote at her free time. She also loves music and the theater since she was young. At the last day of the 7th grade, she was chased by a hellhound when she was chatting with her best friend about summer holiday plans. Her best friend, who turned out to be a satyr, grabbed her by the hand immediately and they ran to Camp Half-Blood.
Physical Appearance: Candy was 5’4 in height. She has shoulder-length straight dark brown hair and dark brown eyes. She’s neither fat nor thin, in the middle. She likes wearing comfortable clothing: a T-shirt and jeans. She loves wearing T-shirts with inspirational quotes on them.
Personality: Candy is smart, friendly, optimistic and has a sense of humor. She’s also willing to learn things and not afraid to try something new. She has short and long term goals for herself and wants to accomplish a lot of things in her life. She loves her family and friends and spends a lot of time with them.
Fatal Flaw: Stubborness. For example, Candy thinks she’s always right. She seldom admits that she had done something wrong and often blames the others. However, she cares about her family and friends a lot and is willing to give up her life for them. When her family or friends are held captive, she can’t think straight and is willing to do anything to get them back because she cares for them a lot and is very stubborn, which means that she has fallen into the trap that the enemy planned.
Talents: Candy usually gets straight A’s and is good at writing. She can act, sing and play the guitar well.
Weapons: a sword, bow and arrows
Other:
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Re: Candy Cheung

Post  GeneralArin on Mon Aug 26, 2013 3:42 pm

God Parent: You should choose one. Poseidon is full at the moment, so that's a no-go. Athena and Apollo will both have a decent amount of cabin mates. From your talents, it looks like Apollo's a better bet: he's got all the arts, like writing and music.

Fatal Flaw: Again, choose one. Either way, try to tie it into your personality more, the first option usually ties in to stubbornness of some sort, or at least a struggle to change. The second option can be borne of stubbornness, like it is for my character, but it also can be from sympathy or a need to please people. You can only have one fatal flaw, so choose the one thing that applies most, or tie the two together.


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Re: Candy Cheung

Post  Guest on Tue Aug 27, 2013 10:40 pm

Okay, so...

Name: Candy Cheung
Age: 12 (almost 13)
God Parent: (either one will be okay) Poseidon/Athena/Apollo
Mortal Family: Fai and Connie Cheung (parents)
Years in Camp: 0
Brief History: Candy is a small town girl that went to school like other normal kids and did well. She read and wrote at her free time. She also loves music and the theater since she was young. At the last day of the 7th grade, she was chased by a hellhound when she was chatting with her best friend about summer holiday plans. Her best friend, who turned out to be a satyr, grabbed her by the hand immediately and they ran to Camp Half-Blood.
Physical Appearance: Candy was 5’4 in height. She has shoulder-length straight dark brown hair and dark brown eyes. She’s neither fat nor thin, in the middle. She likes wearing comfortable clothing: a T-shirt and jeans. She loves wearing T-shirts with inspirational quotes on them.
Personality: Candy is smart, friendly and has a sense of humor. She’s also willing to learn things and not afraid to try something new. She has short and long term goals for herself and wants to accomplish a lot of things in her life. She loves her family and friends and spends a lot of time with them.
Fatal Flaw: Stubborness. For example, Candy thinks she’s always right. She seldom admits that she had done something wrong and often blames the others. However, she cares about her family and friends a lot and is willing to give up her life for them. When her family or friends are held captive, she can’t think straight and is willing to do anything to get them back because she cares for them a lot and is very stubborn, which means that she has fallen into the trap that the enemy planned.
Talents: Candy usually gets straight A’s and is good at writing. She can act, sing and play the guitar well.
Weapons: a sword, bow and arrows
Other:

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Re: Candy Cheung

Post  ©razy Dude on Wed Aug 28, 2013 8:06 am

Please edit it into the first post.

Edit: Once you do I'll accept it though the bio looks like bare bones. Maybe add a little detail into that? Like how the parents met, how she was born, etc.
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Post  Guest on Wed Aug 28, 2013 10:04 pm

Okay, I've edited it according to GeneralArin and ©razy Dude's advice. Thanks!

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Re: Candy Cheung

Post  ©razy Dude on Wed Aug 28, 2013 10:44 pm

The only nit pick I have is minor and you don't really need to do it, but anyways it's the big paragraph try to seperate those put if you could.

Other than that looks good! Approved! Jus wait for one of the Admins or one of the other Mod to approve it or have you work on something else!
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Post  GeneralArin on Wed Aug 28, 2013 11:35 pm

Approved. Welcome to the site.

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Re: Candy Cheung

Post  Guest on Thu Aug 29, 2013 12:56 am

Thank you so much!

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