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Post  Guest on Thu Aug 29, 2013 8:27 am

Name- Jared Maskon
Age- Twelve years old, almost Thirteen and not once has he been turned into a tree! But he has been attacked by my Second Grade teacher. Long story.
God Parent- Apollo, Greek God of music, prophecies, representation of the sun, healing, and a bunch of other stuff.
Mortal Family- Cynthia Maskon (Mother), and Steven and River Maskon (Brother and Sister.)
Years in Camp- Hopefully this'll be my First!
Brief History- Jared grew up in Wichita, Kansas without a father. He always asked his mother, "Where's daddy?" But she just replied "I don't know." with a sigh. Finally, when they almost lost the house, Jared and his family moved to New York to hopefully make more money. Soon after he moved to New York, he was attacked by none other than his teacher. His Second Grade teacher. She walked Jared down the hall, and to the classroom after she told him she was to talk to him after school. But Jared never thought he would have to stab her with a pencil in the one eye of to get her stop. But he did. (If you wanna hear the whole fight, mail me or ask me to do it in a cabin or something.)
 Jared found out, after he came home from school that day, how his mother and father met. She was in her bikini, tan skin, on the beach. Summer day. Then he came, swimming trunks, tan well built body with abs. It was an instant love, and Jared came to life that night (His mom got pregnant with him.)
Also (this'll be quick) when Jared got attacked by his second grade teacher, a satyr showed himself to Jared after school, in his room. Jared didn't believe him, and forgot it for four years. Then the same satyr- Fern Cornilius- had taken him away from the group during a fire in school. He carried (yes, held, cradled, etc.) him to Camp. Of corse, there were a few bumps. They climbed a mountain! Anyway, then Jared was taken to the big house...

Physical Appearance- Blonde bangs bounced on his forehead as he walked. His blue eyes shimmered in the sunlight. His pale, white skin wouldn't tan, but he still felt stronger in the sunlight. He wore a blue shirt, and red shorts. Some girls thought Jared was a male model. Others thought he was the next Robbert Pattenson.

Personality- Jared is a quiet boy. He's not gonna be one of the 'cool' kids. He isn't athletic like his dad. But he is smart, despite his dyslexia, he had a noggin full of stuff. Jared LOVES music.
Fatal Flaw- Jared's fatal flaw is stubbornness. He believes in what's right. "I sat down first!" He will probably get killed from that trait one day.
Talents- Jared is good at playing the piano (Ode to Joy, Alloette, Fur Elise.) He also sings a bit, (America the Beautiful, Shout (Isley Bros.), I Love It.)
Weapons- A knife, called Elpis. It is a rather long knife, of a 1 ft blade.
Other- PLEASE HURRY AND REPLY OR ACCEPT! I REALLY WANNA RP SOON.



Last edited by GeneralArin on Mon Sep 02, 2013 3:07 pm; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : I need to edit after being critiqed.)

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Re: Jared Maskon

Post  ©razy Dude on Thu Aug 29, 2013 4:28 pm

First off 12 is the lowest I'll go for this. Add to the history also some experiences with monsters, how his parents met, etc. because the bio needs a lot more.

And I'm confused on if you're planning on rping to help find him and being him to CHB or not. If that is the case cool idea but it'd need admin consent. Which Jake will post on here sometime and tell you yes or no.
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Post  ©razy Dude on Fri Aug 30, 2013 4:42 pm

Ok looks better the bio looks like bare bones but it reaches the requirement. I'm also assuming he's been found due to your PM to me. You need to put how he was found.
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Post  ©razy Dude on Fri Aug 30, 2013 6:11 pm

Ok looks better. Approved! You'll have to wait for one of the admins or Lily to also approve this.
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Post  Lily on Fri Aug 30, 2013 7:16 pm

Please edit out the personal comments on your application.
We have third person POV roleplays and like our character applications to be similar as well. Try referencing another person's app.
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Post  GeneralArin on Mon Sep 02, 2013 3:09 pm

Alright, so content-wise, its better. I can't really tell you much of what to add, so I think its okay then.
It would be better if you could flesh out the personallity and flaw, but it's alright for now.

I'll put you through. We just need another staff member to formally approve you.

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Re: Jared Maskon

Post  Guest on Mon Sep 02, 2013 3:26 pm

What? No, you guys said 2 had to approve. Not three. So what the crap?

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Post  GeneralArin on Mon Sep 02, 2013 4:11 pm

Did Andrew approve it? I didn't read it as that.

Oh, there it is. I missed it. You're approved.

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