Conner verka (for lack of a better name)

Name: Conner verka (because I am to dumb to think of a real last name lol)
Age:14
God Parent:apollo
Mortal Family: First and Last Name/s: John verka(died durring the same event Kens dad died.)
Years in Camp:0 *for now DUN DUN DUN*
Brief History: He used to be friends with Ken retina. They went to the same school, lived in the same neighborhood and hung out often. Then When ken was chased back to his home by monsters and he ran into his friend He was thought of as dead and was left to deal with the monsters. He exscaped but He had found out his dad who was stopping by at the time had died in the fire of kens home along with most of kens and his friends. He then was taken in by socal services not having any other family. He blames Ken for abandoning him and his godly parent for every thing that goes wrong in his life. He is now dedicated to over throwing the gods and getting revenge on Ken for abandoning him.
Physical Appearance:He is taller a rather muscular. He is white. Hehas black hair cut in a short military style, blue eyes, and a scar the runs a crossed his face. He His left arm also has a claw mark scar on it.
Personality:He is very stubborn. He is extremely rebellious. He is usually very dark and very serous. Very rarely is he not this way. He has a get it done attitude.
Fatal Flaw:He is very stubborn and dose not like to be commanded around. He very rarely listens to higher in command people. This is partly because he rarely trusts any one any more due to what happened with ken. This can be really bad because if he was given a direct order to not shoot and he saw something like some one who had killed his friend or something he would not listen and shoot. Then there position is given away and they are surrounded.
Talents:He is very good with a bow and arrow, crossbow, and is decent with dual blades. He also is very athletic and stronger than most people. He can use this to his advantage in a fight rather easily.
Weapons:dual short broad swords, bow and arrows.
Other:*I was thinking he could end up being a spy. Inside of camp.

dododooooo

*cough cough* some one look at this please *cough cough*

Yah, I see it. I was hoping to pull a "I'll just let the mods look at it first then I'll give useful imput."


Well, for the spy bit, I was hoping you'd set it up a bit more in the application. Preferably give me some actual reasons for why your character should be a spy, how you would play being a spy, both meta and in character.

Why does everyone have thier characters arch rivals? My 2nd is barely aware the first exists... and the only reason why the first does is because Kris talks about him.

Personality is a bit short, but I can't tell you what to add, so it must be sufficient. Good job elaborating on the Fatal Flaw.

My main thing is that if you want him to be a spy, give him some more appealing qualities to make him a spy. Mark wouldn't put some green guy out behind enemy lines without proof of loyalty, lack of knowledge of Titan plans, both... some sort of desirable aspects that would make things justifiable.
And of course, how you would manage being a spy in character. That requires consistent contact with at least Mark, the ability to pull the wool over most people's eyes, (including your arch rival, who also goes to the same camp and who used to be best buds, or at least to the point where there's no proof of defect), and the rather cheap mechanic of having both characters in camp most of the time.

Well what I was thinking is ken would run into him on his trip they would fight but then ken gets away. He then will talk to one of titan army people that are incharges of him. He convinces him *just barely* to pretend he forgave him and follow him to camp to be a spy. (he will finnaly agree when he says he will be able to do what ever he wanted to do to ken and make him suffer REAL suffering rather than just death). ... jsut a though. But like I said He dose not have to be a spy its just an idea.

The only problem I'd have about this is the self RPing. Obviously in bigger threads you'd have to do it or in battles but with both being at camp this could lead to that.

Which is something I know Kris doesn't like and something I don't care for much either. If you keep that to a minimum I'd be fine with it.

And also I'll let Jake talk to you about the rest of it, seeing as he's the head of TA.

I'm going to agree with the fighting yourself deal, that's irritating for us, boring for you and can easily turn into god mod. Keep that down to a minimum.


I'm still not thrilled about you being such a green Titan army member and then right off the bat being sent off as a spy. And seeing as your character is obviously emotionally unstable, it'll be tough to get him to keep his cover and overall seems more like a risk with Ken right there. You'd have to justify that between both characters, with them both knowing each other and the relationship between the two strained to say the least, Connor'd have to keep on his toes to avoid suspicion and discredit Ken's suspicions.

So, with the character as it is, a spy doesn't look very plausible.

If you don't mind not being a spy, then you're okay to go by me.
Otherwise, things need to be added, like a certain acting ability, time of proven loyalty to the Titan Army, things like that.

Okay so scrap the spy thing maybe some one else can do that.

also it would be nice if conner had 2 arch enemys.

another thought is he could be nether camper nor titan army.

Gen do you have a skype. That way I could possibly discuss a better Idea that would fit with that ever story every one else is doing. I feel like I went from involved in story to that random guy again. رØ

I do, but I feel a bit weird giving it out. Partially my own preferences and security, partially because I'd talking to a younger boy that I don't have any personal connection to on the internet.

We can try and talk it out a bit on a seperate topic or via pm. Or maybe if we manage to hit a chatbox around the same time.

chat box would be better. its just its kinda hard with the forum post