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Leslie Mendoza

Post  Emma Skarsgard on Wed Nov 27, 2013 3:26 pm

Name: Leslie Mendoza
Age: 16
God Parent: Hecate
Years at Camp: 3
Mortal Parents: Elezibeth and Garet Mendoza


Breif History: Leslie was born to Elezibeth and Garet Mendoza.., or so she thought. Leslie lived a pretty normal life, if you called getting kicked out of school normal. Leslie was constantly getting kicked from private schools. When Leslie was 12 weird things started to happen if they couldn't get weirder enough. People started floating in the air. Five days before Leslie's b-day her best friend Rane told her that they had to go. That her parents would understand. Leslie had no idea how but she kept defeating monsters trying to get at her and Rane. They finally arrived. Leslie got claimed by Hecate on the day of her birthday.
Physical Appearance: Leslie is 5'2. She Has Brown hair and Green Eyes. She had pale skin. She has broad shoulders. Leslie has a medium-length neck and short cheekbones. You can usually find her wearing a short sleave blue pok-a-dot shirt or her orange Camp Half-Blood shirt with skinny jeans in the summer or long sleave striped shirt with skinny jeans in the winter.

Personality: Leslie is more of a listener than a talker. She thinks of herself as a person that someone can go to, to talk to about there problems. Leslie picks to follow others than lead others.. for right now. All she wants to do is learn from others to become a leader. Not start out as a leader. Thats only her opinion.

Fatal Flaw: Leslie is a little to soft. She isn't the Ares-Child-Kill-All type she was the more Sit-Back-Out-Of-The-Way type. Leslie learned quickly at Camp Half-Blood that she can't do that. She must step up and form into a leader. So Leslie followed after the leader and formed into someone who isn't afraid to hurt someone IF NEEDED, she still once kill someone harmless. Once when she was playing capture the flag she refused to hurt someone on the other team when they were stealing the flag so she just froze them and ran away. This resulted in her team losing, they hated her for weeks. Her protector Rane had to tell her that if she was going to survive she had to sop being soft. Leslie got her courage up and stopped being that soft. She never thought she come to kill someone though ever, enemy or not.

Talents: Control the Mist, Do Magic, (IF aloud she can form into a polecat)

Weapons: Magic, and Her Sword of Celestial Bronze.


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Re: Leslie Mendoza

Post  ©razy Dude on Fri Nov 29, 2013 12:57 pm

We've already got 2 Hades children so you'll have to choose a different god parent.
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Post  Emma Skarsgard on Fri Nov 29, 2013 5:09 pm

Got it I fixed it.
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Post  GeneralArin on Fri Nov 29, 2013 6:09 pm

Weapon:
We don't allow Iron swords.


Personality:
I'm not quite understanding your personality.
Keeps to herself, lonely, and kind. Forgiving?

The part with: "something to be know about emma: You better kill her once because if you don't your either dead then and there or looking behind your back for the rest of your life" doesn't make particular sense to me, but are you trying to say she's vengeful?
That feels contradictory to "Emma does not think twice about people that are mean to her." It sounds like here you're saying that you ignore offencive comments, which doesn't feel like it fits with the vengeance implied in the next sentence, or that you just ignore mean people all together.

General:
You reference your dad a lot in the application... could you try to rephrase things to just reference the character herself, and not Thanatos? (Or at least reference him less.)


Powers:
Since you're a minor god child, I'd say that commanding the dead is a bit much. Thanatos is more of the grim reaper sort anyway, and doesn't really have much lasting contact with dead people. He just collects the dead souls and takes them to the underworld.
So talking to and sensing death makes sense. Raising the dead and commanding the dead not so much, not to mention way too powerful for a minor god.

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Post  Emma Skarsgard on Wed Dec 25, 2013 3:51 am

Think I MIGHT be good.
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Post  ©razy Dude on Wed Dec 25, 2013 1:48 pm

The Romans aren't known to the Campers on this site, so the half Imperial Gold is out. (Good idea though)

Fatal Flaw doesn't explain how it could be her downfall. I'd try to give an example.

Raising the dead isn't allowed for a child of Hecate.
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Post  Emma Skarsgard on Thu Dec 26, 2013 2:10 am

-Sigh- If this doesn't work I give up.
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Post  ©razy Dude on Thu Dec 26, 2013 3:10 am

Looks good enough, approved. Wait for another staff member to approve or have you fix something. Sorry for all this.
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Post  ©razy Dude on Thu Dec 26, 2013 3:10 am

Looks good enough, approved. Wait for another staff member to approve or have you fix something. Sorry for all this.
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Post  GeneralArin on Thu Dec 26, 2013 1:52 pm

I turning into a pole cat can count under doing magic, just don't do it too often.

Looks good. Approved.

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