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Post  Masteroux on Tue Apr 08, 2014 9:22 am

Name: Aimee Jones

Age: 14.

God Parent: Daughter of Hera

Mortal Family: Valarie Laxstrom (Stepmother), Alexander Jones (Father), Phillip Laxstrom ( Halfbrother dec. ), Annalise Laxstrom ( Halfsister dec. )

Years in Camp: 4.5 years

History: life has been fine, well until she woke up in the middle of the to see a Drakkon with its snout near her face. Her Stepmother and her always fought- she wasn't an only child her two younger step siblings were deceased; both from SIDS apparently and her stepmother wanted another one. After single-handedly blowing up/ destroying the kitchen she attended school, bullied and alone her father's attention was more focused on her stepmother and her wish to be a parent again. After yet another row with them both they got their wish- she packed her bag: 2 pairs of fresh clothes, her trusty combat trench knife and throwing knives as well as her necklace that was her mothers...whoever she was. After getting into so much strife like hitchhiking, stealing things to get food or get transportation she finally reaches Camp Half blood...only to have her face flushed down the toilet...yuck! But of course her assailants found them selves in the infirmary after having knives thrown at them. Being there for nearly 5 years now she seen The Great Prophecy start, Thalia Grace turn back from a tree, Artemis being kidnapped...or was it god-napped? And finally The Battle Of The Labyrinth.

Physical Appearance: At range height ( 5 feet 7) she has long dark brown, almost charcoal colored hair, dark almond eyes. She has three small to mid length scars running next to her lips, like a claw mark that she got from climbing trees. Lean muscled from running all day and from working out on her own. She always wears dark clothing being the reason they hide grass stains better than light/white clothing.

Personality: She's a loner, loves her friends who have become her family, easily cranky but never angry per say, a mostly reflective nature to which her martial arts lessons help to calm her down. On the other hand easily riled up by adults ( especially gods ) telling her what to do so on, it always seems her friends always have their hands on around her mouth to pipe her down and with that... well the 'eyes are the windows to the soul' aren't they? That's where everything is seen yet not seen.

Fatal Flaw: Grudges; yep you heard it. No loving " I'll do anything for you Mum/Mother!" Nope she holds them. Grudging on why her mother wasn't there for her, on her fathers anger at how is life turned out to be- he wanted normalcy well, he got anything but that. Grudging on her stepmothers spiteful nature towards her. It sometimes shows how detached she is from her mother's domain - Family, Marriage etc so her link with her Mother must be damaged or weakened in some way.

Talents: She's a free runner/ parkour / acrobatics learning from running from tree trunks and branches makes her extremely agile. Martial arts- kendo, ninjistu and karate. On par with kendo she has above average knife wielding abilities which cross over to swords.

Weapons: Primary weapons: 2 hunting knives and 2 celestial bronze swords.
Secondary weapons: Bow and arrows set and throwing knife set.

Other: Well her mother thinks she's not hers.

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Re: New Character : Aimee Jones

Post  GeneralArin on Tue Apr 08, 2014 9:53 am

Well, I'm afraid your mother was right, since Hera (the goddess of marriage) was one of the few non-virgins that didn't have other lovers. Try another parent.

Drop the years back to four years.

And this site exists miles away from the original series, and independent of the new series. So no, you have not seen any of the events that happened in the original series either. So that's also being shot down.

And drakons are serious, big-wig monsters. You did not encounter one and survive. And since your character isn't a ghost....Take that out too.


You have quite a few weapons.... and you carry all of these around at once, do you? If so, you're stronger than most full grown men. Since you're a 14 year old girl, drop back the weapon count a bit.

For your talents, you know three martial arts well, and minimally in kendo. (And knife fighting does not directly translate to swordfighting, the only thing that's the same is 'keep the pointy end away from you.) So, explain how you know at least the basics of four different martial arts-- or even better, cut it down to a more reasonable amount, then tell me how you know it.

I think that's long enough for now, fix these, and we'll try again.

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Trying Again for this Character: EDIT #1

Post  Masteroux on Tue Apr 08, 2014 11:03 pm

Name: Aimee Jones

Age: 14.

God Parent: Daughter of Nemesis

Mortal Family: Valarie Laxstrom (Stepmother), Alexander Jones (Father), Phillip Laxstrom ( Halfbrother dec. ), Annalise Laxstrom ( Halfsister dec. )

Years in Camp: 4 years

History: life has been fine, well until she woke up in the middle of the to overhear her father and his wife having yet another shouting match she looked outside her window to see a cloaked woman *hint hint* watching her from her window along a dimly lit alley way. Her Stepmother and her always fought- she wasn't an only child her two younger step siblings were deceased; both from SIDS apparently and her stepmother wanted another one. After single-handedly blowing up/ destroying the kitchen she attended school, bullied and alone her father's attention was more focused on her stepmother and her wish to be a parent again. After yet another row with them both they got their wish- she packed her bag: 2 pairs of fresh clothes, her trusty combat trench knife and throwing knives as well as her necklace that was her mothers...whoever she was. After getting into so much strife like hitchhiking, stealing things to get food or get transportation she finally reaches Camp Half blood...only to have her face flushed down the toilet...yuck! But of course her assailants found them selves in the infirmary after having knives thrown at them.

Physical Appearance: At range height ( 5 feet 7) she has long dark brown, almost charcoal colored hair, dark almond eyes. She has three small to mid length scars running next to her lips, like a claw mark that she got from climbing trees. Lean muscled from running all day and from working out on her own. She always wears dark clothing being the reason they hide grass stains better than light/white clothing.

Personality: She's a loner, loves her friends who have become her family, easily cranky but never angry per say, a mostly reflective nature to which her martial arts lessons help to calm her down. On the other hand easily riled up by adults ( especially gods ) telling her what to do so on, it always seems her friends always have their hands on around her mouth to pipe her down and with that... well the 'eyes are the windows to the soul' aren't they? That's where everything is seen yet not seen.

Fatal Flaw: Grudges; yep you heard it. No loving " I'll do anything for you Mum/Mother!" Nope she holds them. Grudging on why her mother wasn't there for her, on her fathers anger at how is life turned out to be- he wanted normalcy well, he got anything but that. Grudging on her stepmothers spiteful nature towards her. She never forgets an insult or cheek from others and full heartidly agrees that pompous people who think they're all that need to be whacked over their heads by a shovel and brought down back to reality.

Talents: She's a free runner/ parkour / acrobatics learning from running from tree trunks and branches makes her extremely agile.
Martial arts- kendo ( 2-dan or 2 years experience ) & ninjistu ( 5th Kyu or Green Belt ): These were to implement some sort of inner balance and calm. The reason being her step/parent knew she had a shocking temper and would blow up rather violently. Instead of giving Rentoilin and other ADHD drugs it was an alternative way to redirect her frustrations and bitterness from her father and ...her towards targets and other things.
karate- ( 5th kyu - violet belt) After been bashed and relentlessly bullied she picked up lesson both in and out of school on physical defense/offence after unsuccessfully imploring her father to allow her to train in other more contact heavy martial arts he relented and allowed her to ise karate as a means of final defense. She was training nonstop until it showed she was more collected kin her thoughts as well as not being as aggressive to everyone around her. It was until her red Belt that she started on her Kendo lessons.
On par with kendo/ninjitsu she has above average knife wielding abilities ( Sai and Shruiken in ninjitsu ).

Weapons: Primary weapons: 2 hunting knives and 2 celestial bronze swords.
Secondary weapons: Bow and arrows set and throwing knife set. (-------These weapons are kept in her supply bag under her bed as well as one of her two primary swords.

Other: Well, she's never met her mother.

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Re: New Character : Aimee Jones

Post  Cerulaen on Wed Apr 09, 2014 2:05 am

Okay, now that we've got the major stuff out of the way, onto the refining edits! Let's see if I can say these in a coherent and somewhat structured order...

For starters, you say in one or two areas that your character has this outrageous temper (I think mainly in the Talents section), however you completely contradict this by saying in your personality that she "is never angry per se", just cranky. You need to pick one or the other. If you want her to be weak to random bouts of anger, that needs to be described in her personality, and I also want you to explain why she is that way. Nemesis is the goddess of revenge, not anger, so that's not a reason, either. If you choose NOT to make her a rage machine, you'll need to come up with another reason for all your fighting skills.

Besides the explaining the anger if you so care to do, you also need to expand on your history. I don't know much of anything of her background, other than her parents argue and her stepmom doesn't like her for some reason. My questions are: why doesn't her stepmom like her? Why do kids bully her? Are you saying neither of her parents liked her, and that's why she left? Where did she originally live?--because I don't think 10-year-olds would be able to make it alone with no money for very long. Where in the world did she supposedly learn to throw knives? And where did she even GET these knives? I'm fairly certain sane parents don't hand out knife-throwing sets to their little grader-schoolers. Also, how did she know to go to Camp Half-Blood, how did she find her way there by herself, and if your character has been at camp for 4 years, I need to know what she's been doing there. Please justify your seniority.

For personality--I just wanna point out that being a loner and having close friends is rather contradictory. I'd take the loner thing out, from the looks of it.

Please explain how your Fatal Flaw could be "fatal" to your character.

I'll let slide all the knowledge in the different styles of fighting, however--you have way too many other talents. If she spends all her time learning these styles of fighting, she wouldn't have a decent amount of time to spend learning parkour and acrobatics to actually be good at them. Also, I see no reason for her to be an advanced knife-thrower before camp, or for her to even learn how to throw knives before camp. I'm guessing she'd be able to defend herself without the help of weapons at that point.

Arin kind of hinted that you should tone down your weapons, but since it looked like you basically ignored that... here is my ultimatum: you can have two weapons. A set of throwing knives would count as one weapon. You do not need multiple swords, or knives (if they're not a set).

Fix those things sufficiently, and you should be set.
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Yep it's edit #2

Post  Masteroux on Wed Apr 09, 2014 11:07 pm

Name: Aimee Jones

Age: 14.

God Parent: Daughter of Nemesis

Mortal Family: Valarie Laxstrom (Stepmother), Alexander Jones (Father), Phillip Laxstrom ( Halfbrother dec. ), Annalise Laxstrom ( Halfsister dec. )

Years in Camp: 4 years

History: She lived in Melbourne, Australia when she grew up in the middle class environment where her father Alexander worked as a naval captain. Alexander met her stepmother Valarie during a parental meeting for one of her many school yard fights, where she was principal. After a year of dating, when she was 7 they married and quickly later found themselves expecting their first full blooded child between them. During that time Valarie's true colors came out and made it nearly impossible to be around her father, twisting vile lies and weaving together stories that made her look like the school yard bully- only thing was she wasn't. Alexander as a man was a no nonsense sort of man who was completely under his new wife's spell willingly of course; when he found out one of his 'last' one night stands was in fact a goddess whose, child they procreated was his to raise. He turned to the urgency of normality quickly by turning to the bottle and also by ignoring his first mistake/child in hopes it was all a bad dream.

Her time at school was no better if not worse than her time at home, when she was angry near by electronics would start smoking and nearly simultaneously blowing up between anything she had interacted with or had walked past.When at school odd thing happened that no one could understand or could deny happened like " why does little Johnny gone all white?" or " why does little Max's nose bleeding and tooth missing?". Of course she was always blamed. No mater how many times she protests saying they're the ones who are bulling her not the other way around. The other children not wanting to be the next targets of the terrible twosome they too, bullied her and made her school life a misery. After the tenth failed attempt to talk to her stepmother about the bulling a gust of wind and the smell of burnt asphalt wafted through the air and a pamphlet flew into her; she looked around warily then looked at the pamphlet and saw it was an advertisement about the near -by down town dojo; specializing in ninjitsu: Sakushin Ninjutsu Martial Arts School in Glen Waverley. After pestering, her parents eventually take her to the near by dojo and started her lessons to curve her 'vicious cycle of tormenting those poor boys' as an alternative to anger management. After yet another suspension from school and her inal warning to curb her temper and violent tendencies she had broken out of her room by the window and attended the near by karate dojo by the name of Samurai Karate Wantirna in secret. The only reason why she did it in secret was her drive to never to be hurt again, having enough of being their own punching bag she trained twice as hard than everyone else in the classes she had enrolled in from her stepmother's 'missing' credit card. After about 10 months of training she had already attained her violet belt and at the same time tragedy struck her home. Her 2 month old half brother Phillip had suddenly passed away; doctors had said it was SIDS but her stepmother wouldn't have it. She blamed her for causing the death of her 'perfect' son who was born healthy up until her father had insulted his former lover.

After he step brother's death the third time the smell of burnt asphalt and yet another pamphlet this time to a kendo dojo by the name of Burwood kendo Club in Glen Iris where she trained for two years. Her parents didn't want her in the house or to be quite frank, near them at all. Valarie again found herself pregnant determined that this time she'll have a healthy baby to take care of, she didn't want the freak near her or her baby bump so they allowed he to continue to train in the three martial arts styles. As a result in her ninjitsu training they started on sparring with close combat weapons, namely sais and shuruiken to better oneself in agility and blocking, where the first signs of her being a demigod started to happen. The next and final time of her being in the school yard; Aimee finally snapped and putting 2 nearing 3 years of experience in defense and offence she had taken care of her bulling problem once and for all. Bashing and crashing through corridors the now fleeing, terrified and bloodied boys failed to notice a woman peering into the window, a whip wrapped around her waist her dark eyes glinted as they ran in fear.

The monsters started to notice her at the same time she got her much anticipated vengeance against the 'little' boys her days living with her parent were quickly coming to a close. When Valarie gave birth to Annalise; the monsters attacked for the final time. Valarie screaming her head off at her stepdaughter to leave, "Never come back you worthless stupid freak!" was noticed by the neighbor who had just so happened to have moved into next door broke through the partially opened door and swiped Aimee as a shadowy woman watched on. As she struggled to get out of her captors grasp she felt a surge of energy familiar yet foreign to her coursed through her veins and every single electronic in her wake blew up from what was treated by a 'power surge'. Aimee let out an agonized, sorrow filled scream as the surge went in and through her body. She blacked out soon afterwards. She wakes up disorientated not knowing where she is or what time it is only with a hunting knife and a note saying: " Welcome home, Daughter of Mine.". Till this very day she has never returned home to her father and stepmother whom had lost Annalise shortly after Valarie and Alexander had been convicted of child abuse and neglect. What has been leaked was a pair of scales had been found next to the documents holding the details of their horrid treatment of their daughter/stepdaughter.

Aimee has stayed in the Hermes cabin for the last 4 years. She still has anger issues to deal with but still practices her martial arts. She's currently getting tutored by a group of older Athena campers for her education. She has been diagnosed with minor Electromagnetic Energy Pulse, a rare side affect she's had since birth. She's no where near as powerful as children of Zeus with the ability but she can cause electronics to simultaneously blow up when enraged.

Physical Appearance: At range height ( 5 feet 7) she has long dark brown, almost charcoal colored hair, dark almond eyes. She has three small to mid length scars running next to her lips, like a claw mark that she got from climbing trees. Lean muscled from running all day and from working out on her own. She always wears dark clothing being the reason they hide grass stains better than light/white clothing.

Personality: She's hard to trust new people and adults, loves her friends who have become her family, easily agitated and hostile to others who bully her, a mostly reflective nature to which her martial arts lessons help to calm her down. On the other hand easily riled up by adults ( especially gods ) telling her what to do so on, it always seems her friends always have their hands on around her mouth to pipe her down and with that... well the 'eyes are the windows to the soul' aren't they? That's where everything is seen yet not seen.

Fatal Flaw: Grudges; yep you heard it. No loving " I'll do anything for you Mum/Mother!" Nope she holds them. Grudging on why her mother wasn't there for her, on her fathers anger at how is life turned out to be- he wanted normalcy well, he got anything but that. Grudging on her stepmothers spiteful nature towards her. She never forgets an insult or cheek from others and full heartidly agrees that pompous people who think they're all that need to be whacked over their heads by a shovel and brought down back to reality. The fatal part of this grudging for her would be when she needs help from people who she thinks have wronged her in one way or another. So, when given a choice of either receive/ask for help whether on the battle field from them it'll leave her open for attacks whether its psychological, emotional or physical attack- that's where her guard comes down and she's more vulnerable because her guards down or she's not paying attention.  

Talents: She's fast and agile from learning how to use her body as a weapon from her martial arts training.
Martial arts- kendo ( 2-dan or 2 years experience ) & ninjistu ( 5th Kyu or Green Belt ): These were to implement some sort of inner balance and calm. The reason being her step/parent knew she had a shocking temper and would blow up rather violently. Instead of giving Rentoilin and other ADHD drugs it was an alternative way to redirect her frustrations and bitterness from her father and ...her towards targets and other things.
karate- ( 5th kyu - violet belt) After been bashed and relentlessly bullied she picked up lesson both in and out of school on physical defense/offence after unsuccessfully imploring her father to allow her to train in other more contact heavy martial arts he relented and allowed her to ise karate as a means of final defense. She was training nonstop until it showed she was more collected kin her thoughts as well as not being as aggressive to everyone around her. It was until her red Belt that she started on her Kendo lessons.

Weapons: Primary weapon: A celestial sword strapped to her back
Secondary weapon: A hunting knife strapped to her thigh

Other: Well, she's never met her mother.

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Post  Cerulaen on Thu Apr 10, 2014 11:57 am

Well, I think my only main thing left is that power thing you gave yourself. It's not the power itself I mind, although as Ax pointed out, with all of your fighting skills you probably really wouldn't need it--however, the power itself is an Eris thing. Y'know, goddess of strife and discord--her children tend to make technology go haywire. Nemesis...wouldn't have any reason to have that kind of effect on technology. So I would say either change your god parent (which would lead to a few other changes, like your references to Nemesis obviously), or take the power out.

Oh, and how did she get from Australia to New York? Either you missed that, or I did.

Oh--and ONE more thing. You say your character has stayed in the Hermes Cabin for the last four years, and she's 14. Demigods must be claimed by the age of 13, so that would need to be changed. Just a minor thing.
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Third and hopefully final edit #3

Post  Masteroux on Thu Apr 10, 2014 8:59 pm

Name: Aimee Jones

Age: 14.

God Parent: Daughter of Eris

Mortal Family: Valarie Laxstrom (Stepmother), Alexander Jones (Father), Phillip Laxstrom ( Halfbrother dec. ), Annalise Laxstrom ( Halfsister dec. )

Years in Camp: 4 years

History: She lived in Melbourne, Australia when she grew up in the middle class environment where her father Alexander worked as a naval captain. Alexander met her stepmother Valarie during a parental meeting for one of her many school yard fights, where she was principal. After a year of dating, when she was 7 they married and quickly later found themselves expecting their first full blooded child between them. During that time Valarie's true colors came out and made it nearly impossible to be around her father, twisting vile lies and weaving together stories that made her look like the school yard bully- only thing was she wasn't. Alexander as a man was a no nonsense sort of man who was completely under his new wife's spell willingly of course; when he found out one of his 'last' one night stands was in fact a goddess whose, child they procreated was his to raise. He turned to the urgency of normality quickly by turning to the bottle and also by ignoring his first mistake/child in hopes it was all a bad dream.

Her time at school was no better if not worse than her time at home, when she was angry near by electronics would start smoking and nearly simultaneously blowing up between anything she had interacted with or had walked past.When at school odd thing happened that no one could understand or could deny happened like " why does little Johnny gone all white?" or " why does little Max's nose bleeding and tooth missing?". Of course she was always blamed. No mater how many times she protests saying they're the ones who are bulling her not the other way around. The other children not wanting to be the next targets of the terrible twosome they too, bullied her and made her school life a misery. After the tenth failed attempt to talk to her stepmother about the bulling a gust of wind and the smell of burnt asphalt wafted through the air and a pamphlet flew into her; she looked around warily then looked at the pamphlet and saw it was an advertisement about the near -by down town dojo; specializing in ninjitsu: Sakushin Ninjutsu Martial Arts School in Glen Waverley. After pestering, her parents eventually take her to the near by dojo and started her lessons to curve her 'vicious cycle of tormenting those poor boys' as an alternative to anger management. After yet another suspension from school and her inal warning to curb her temper and violent tendencies she had broken out of her room by the window and attended the near by karate dojo by the name of Samurai Karate Wantirna in secret. The only reason why she did it in secret was her drive to never to be hurt again, having enough of being their own punching bag she trained twice as hard than everyone else in the classes she had enrolled in from her stepmother's 'missing' credit card. After about 10 months of training she had already attained her violet belt and at the same time tragedy struck her home. Her 2 month old half brother Phillip had suddenly passed away; doctors had said it was SIDS but her stepmother wouldn't have it. She blamed her for causing the death of her 'perfect' son who was born healthy up until her father had insulted his former lover.

After he step brother's death the third time the smell of burnt asphalt and yet another pamphlet this time to a kendo dojo by the name of Burwood kendo Club in Glen Iris where she trained for two years. Her parents didn't want her in the house or to be quite frank, near them at all. Valarie again found herself pregnant determined that this time she'll have a healthy baby to take care of, she didn't want the freak near her or her baby bump so they allowed he to continue to train in the three martial arts styles. As a result in her ninjitsu training they started on sparring with close combat weapons, namely sais and shuruiken to better oneself in agility and blocking, where the first signs of her being a demigod started to happen. The next and final time of her being in the school yard; Aimee finally snapped and putting 2 nearing 3 years of experience in defense and offence she had taken care of her bulling problem once and for all. Bashing and crashing through corridors the now fleeing, terrified and bloodied boys failed to notice a woman peering into the window, a whip wrapped around her waist her dark eyes glinted as they ran in fear.

The monsters started to notice her at the same time she got her much anticipated vengeance against the 'little' boys her days living with her parent were quickly coming to a close. When Valarie gave birth to Annalise; the monsters attacked for the final time. Valarie screaming her head off at her stepdaughter to leave, "Never come back you worthless stupid freak!" was noticed by the neighbor who had just so happened to have moved into next door broke through the partially opened door and swiped Aimee as a shadowy woman watched on. As she struggled to get out of her captors grasp she felt a surge of energy familiar yet foreign to her coursed through her veins and every single electronic in her wake blew up from what was treated by a 'power surge'. Aimee let out an agonized, sorrow filled scream as the surge went in and through her body. She blacked out soon afterwards. She wakes up disorientated not knowing where she is or what time it is only with a hunting knife and a note saying: " Welcome home, Daughter of Mine." Another woman found her outside on the curb near her former home she took out a strange golden coin and tossed it to the ground where seconds later a decrepit American taxi stood. The woman motioned her to go inside, only to look her in the eye when she did that. An amulet of crossed daggers,with a burning torch as well as a hissing adder entwining the daggers and torch together. Aimee still dazed and weak from the energy backlash soon found her self asleep when she woke up the drivers had said "Oh don't worry love, it's already been paid for." She noticed after the taxi disappearing from sight a huge tree on top of a hill with a sleeping dragon underneath it. she made it to camp, done the obligatory meet and greet, tour and get her own version of her name from Mr. D " Amity James " where she walks into the Hermes cabin and thinks "Yes, Welcome Home. At Last." .Till this very day she has never returned home to her father and stepmother whom had lost Annalise shortly after Valarie and Alexander had been convicted of child abuse and neglect. What has been leaked was a poniard, a small thin dagger used for stabbing with the image of a hissing adder adorning the hilt had been found next to the documents holding the details of their horrid treatment of their daughter/stepdaughter.

Aimee has stayed in the Hermes cabin for the last 3 years. When she was claimed by her mother, Eris she moved into her new cabin and new step siblings. She still has anger issues to deal with but still practices her martial arts. She's currently getting tutored by a group of older Athena campers for her education. She has been diagnosed with minor Electromagnetic Energy Pulse, a rare side affect she's had since birth. She's no where near as powerful as children of Zeus with the ability but she can cause electronics to simultaneously blow up when enraged.

Physical Appearance: At range height ( 5 feet 7) she has long dark brown, almost charcoal colored hair, dark almond eyes. She has three small to mid length scars running next to her lips, like a claw mark that she got from climbing trees. Lean muscled from running all day and from working out on her own. She always wears dark clothing being the reason they hide grass stains better than light/white clothing.

Personality: She's hard to trust new people and adults, loves her friends who have become her family, easily agitated and hostile to others who bully her, a mostly reflective nature to which her martial arts lessons help to calm her down. On the other hand easily riled up by adults ( especially gods ) telling her what to do so on, it always seems her friends always have their hands on around her mouth to pipe her down and with that... well the 'eyes are the windows to the soul' aren't they? That's where everything is seen yet not seen.

Fatal Flaw: Wrath; the feeling inordinate and uncontrolled feelings of hatred and anger. Its self-destructiveness and violence melded into one. Her mother is seen as unforgiving and wrathful. Her temper is controlled by this and is one of the ways to bring her down- anger her enough and she'll- for now- forget what you just said to her, blinded by rage has both its high points- dealing more damage in battle and perhaps shrugging off damage and getting angrier at the same time. But its low point where it turns fatal is where it was of self-destructive behavior and which could easily turn into apathy considering she would refuse to help others or ask for help in time of need. She would be overcome in rage, which would make her an easy target, her defenses - mentally, physically etc are compromised by her uncontrollable anger. This is why her martial arts are so much more than beating the snot out of a guy who insulted you happens- to try and deal with her rage issues the martial arts helps calm her, to let her emotions control her meant she wasn't learning properly from her Senseis. To establish a sense of balance in the literal meaning- her rage is too much on one side of the scale so they teach her serenity, tranquility and patience in order to reestablish a more balanced inner scale.

Talents: She's fast and agile from learning how to use her body as a weapon from her martial arts training.
Martial arts- kendo ( 2-dan or 2 years experience ) & ninjistu ( 5th Kyu or Green Belt ): These were to implement some sort of inner balance and calm. The reason being her step/parent knew she had a shocking temper and would blow up rather violently. Instead of giving Rentoilin and other ADHD drugs it was an alternative way to redirect her frustrations and bitterness from her father and ...her towards targets and other things.
karate- ( 5th kyu - violet belt) After been bashed and relentlessly bullied she picked up lesson both in and out of school on physical defense/offence after unsuccessfully imploring her father to allow her to train in other more contact heavy martial arts he relented and allowed her to ise karate as a means of final defense. She was training nonstop until it showed she was more collected kin her thoughts as well as not being as aggressive to everyone around her. It was until her red Belt that she started on her Kendo lessons.

Weapons: Primary weapon: A celestial sword strapped to her back
Secondary weapon: A hunting knife strapped to her thigh

Other: Well, she's met her mother unknowingly, born in the star sign Libra- the scales.


EDIT #3- changed parent from Nemesis to Eris
added in how she got to camp via grey sisters and mother (unkowingly)
changed fatal flaw from grudge to Wrath
changed how long she stayed in Hermes cabin to 3 from 4 and moved her to Eris cabin for 1 year.

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