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New Kid Of the camp

Post  steven.macneil.39 on Fri May 09, 2014 2:26 pm

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Post  Cerulaen on Fri May 09, 2014 2:55 pm

Alrighty...so, first off, this app is waaaay too short. Also, I think we might already have our quota for Hades kids filled, but I'll have to check. I'm not sure how many of them are active...

History: that's pretty much every demigod's life story. I need much more background, maybe how his parents met, what his childhood was like, why he got suspended so many times, any encounters with monsters?

Personality: That's not a personality. I want personality traits. Loves money = greedy, loves fighting = aggressive (?), loves killing = is a psychopath? The last one might be a bit extreme for someone on the good side, but if you can give me a justifiable reason for why he looooves killing, then so be it. But it has to be justified. They ALL need to be justified. Why is being greedy and aggressive such big parts of his personality? That would be part of history. Also, you could add how this causes him to interact with others.

Fatal Flaw: Please explain why your flaw is fatal (i.e. how it could lead to the possible demise of your character)

Weapons: No Stygian iron, change it to Celestial bronze please.

Get all that fixed and then we'll take another look at it.
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Re: New Kid Of the camp

Post  steven.macneil.39 on Fri May 09, 2014 3:04 pm

Hey thanks check my second one ill change it!
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Post  Cerulaen on Fri May 09, 2014 3:07 pm

Which character are you using? You can only have one.
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