Calix Faye ((Posted him in the wrong place last time sorry))

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Calix Faye ((Posted him in the wrong place last time sorry))

Post  Kazecat20141017 on Thu May 29, 2014 7:05 am

Name: Calix Faye

Age: 14 started at camp when he was 12

God Parent: Artemis ((If not allowed then Athena))

Mortal Family: Adam Faye (Father) , Marissa Smith (Step mother), Bianca Faye (Youngest sister 3), Chase Smith (Step brother)

Years in Camp: He has only been at camp for 2 years and he is very excluded to people, he often only talks to the Nymphs. Calix is often very quiet even during groups activities he just listens to what people want him to do and he does it, no objections...... usually.

History: Calix had been seen so many women from his dad trying to find some one like his mom again. The smart woman he had fallen in love had left him just after Calix was born. Calix was angry at his mother for just leaving his dad, leaving him in ruins of sadness. It pissed Calix off that his mother had just such a cold heart, Calix had told his dad he loved him before leaving the small North Dakota house. Calix in the past week or so before he had left, it was like a woman's stern voice was yelling at him. Her voice was strong like steel and it sounded like she was talking to different people, barking orders in the dream to people that Calix couldn't make out. She had told him to go to a place called Camp Half Blood, she said the path would show its self and it had but Calix was ready to go back now. Of course he couldn't with so many monsters between Camp Half Blood and North Dakota on the way to the Camp, Calix had barely made it if not for the gut instinct that he might find his purpose. Well to put it flat he had not and he was thinking he never would.

Physical Appearance: Calix's hair flows down to his shoulder in Dirty Blonde locks, It had the darker color to it since in the fall it gets darker and in the winter he look like a Brunette, but in the spring and summer it is more Blonde. He has forest green eyes like his father's, his dad says that he gets his Dirt blonde hair as a mix between his mother's Brunette hair and his father's Blonde hair. Calix also had freckles four on each cheek and a couple on his nose, he doesn't mind them but he sometimes gets annoyed when people ask him why he has exactly 4 freckles on each cheek like he knew really?

Personality: His father says that he gets his attitude of loyalty from his mother, Calix is very independent, a hard working and born leader if he took the reigns of a group. Calix is very quiet at times when he is shy at first which he often does in groups since he hasn't really found that group of people to call friends yet.

Fatal Flaw: His fatal flaw would be he is very loyal and to a point even if the person is bad or is fighting for the wrong side he will often go with friendship over Rights or will. He has believed a person who used to be alive another demigod when he traveling to the camp and he barely escaped, his friend had been killed by a fury and Calix had fell into the trap because he was loyal to his new demigod friend. Well he has two fatal flaws One is being too loyal and the second is he is very headstrong at times as a leader, he goes by his instinct whether it is wrong or right.

Talents: He is very good at camouflage, and also pretty handy with a tools, people say he should have been the son of Hephaestus but he knows he is only good at screwing things together and nailing things as well since he dad is a carpenter.

Weapons: He used a bow made out of celestial bronze, it's arrows have the left side of Gorgon blood pure poison. It was given to him by the friend who had died when they went into the battle for protection.

Other: Everything is already said so yeah!


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Re: Calix Faye ((Posted him in the wrong place last time sorry))

Post  Axel The Bunny on Thu May 29, 2014 5:29 pm

You should probably take down your other post, also im gonna save the time for the staff and tell you Artemis is a maiden goddess, she doesn't have children, in fact she is the goddess of virginity, and doesn't have any convenient loophole like Athena does, your probably gonna have to change that, also the gorgon blood really doesnt make sense, since poison doesnt remain on an arrow forever, and i doubt your charrie has an unlimited amount of poison or arrows in their quiver which is impossible even by Percy Jackson logic.
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Re: Calix Faye ((Posted him in the wrong place last time sorry))

Post  Kazecat20141017 on Fri May 30, 2014 7:11 am

((Edited version, Is this better?))

Name: Calix Faye

Age: 14 started at camp when he was 12

God Parent: Athena

Mortal Family: Adam Faye (Father) , Marissa Smith (Step mother), Bianca Faye (Youngest sister 3), Chase Smith (Step brother)

Years in Camp: He has only been at camp for 2 years and he is very excluded to people, he often only talks to the Nymphs. Calix is often very quiet even during groups activities he just listens to what people want him to do and he does it, no objections...... usually.

History: Calix had been seen so many women from his dad trying to find some one like his mom again. The smart woman he had fallen in love had left him just after Calix was born. Calix was angry at his mother for just leaving his dad, leaving him in ruins of sadness. It pissed Calix off that his mother had just such a cold heart, Calix had told his dad he loved him before leaving the small North Dakota house. Calix in the past week or so before he had left, it was like a woman's stern voice was yelling at him. Her voice was strong like steel and it sounded like she was talking to different people, barking orders in the dream to people that Calix couldn't make out. She had told him to go to a place called Camp Half Blood, she said the path would show its self and it had but Calix was ready to go back now. Of course he couldn't with so many monsters between Camp Half Blood and North Dakota on the way to the Camp, Calix had barely made it if not for the gut instinct that he might find his purpose. Well to put it flat he had not and he was thinking he never would.

Physical Appearance: Calix's hair flows down to his shoulder in Dirty Blonde locks, It had the darker color to it since in the fall it gets darker and in the winter he look like a Brunette, but in the spring and summer it is more Blonde. He has forest green eyes like his father's, his dad says that he gets his Dirt blonde hair as a mix between his mother's Brunette hair and his father's Blonde hair. Calix also had freckles four on each cheek and a couple on his nose, he doesn't mind them but he sometimes gets annoyed when people ask him why he has exactly 4 freckles on each cheek like he knew really?

Personality: His father says that he gets his attitude of loyalty from his mother, Calix is very independent, a hard working and born leader if he took the reigns of a group. Calix is very quiet at times when he is shy at first which he often does in groups since he hasn't really found that group of people to call friends yet.

Fatal Flaw: His fatal flaw would be he is very loyal and to a point even if the person is bad or is fighting for the wrong side he will often go with friendship over Rights or will. He has believed a person who used to be alive another demigod when he traveling to the camp and he barely escaped, his friend had been killed by a fury and Calix had fell into the trap because he was loyal to his new demigod friend. Well he has two fatal flaws One is being too loyal and the second is he is very headstrong at times as a leader, he goes by his instinct whether it is wrong or right.

Talents: He is very good at camouflage, and also pretty handy with a tools, people say he should have been the son of Hephaestus but he knows he is only good at screwing things together and nailing things as well since he dad is a carpenter.

Weapons: He used a bow made out of celestial bronze, and he has 10 arrow that reappear like Percy Jackson's sword but not immediately it will take at least 2 to 3 hours and one arrow regenerates at a time. He ranges from far away combat to close up combat with his fists.

Other: Everything is already said so yeah!
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Re: Calix Faye ((Posted him in the wrong place last time sorry))

Post  GeneralArin on Sat May 31, 2014 5:13 pm

For the record, there's an edit button at the bottom of your post, and you can go in and edit the original post. Saves from making multiple posts.

Well, you can only have one fatal flaw, so either drop one, or reword things to incorporate both. Headstrong can easily relate to loyalty, especially if that loyalty is born out of stubbornness. If you're going with any headstrong features, you should add that trait to your general personality as well. 

(Blonde is a weird gender-specific word, technically guys are "blond" <no e> and girls are "blonde" <with an e> easy to confuse, but thought I'd let you know.)

And 10 arrows doesn't sound particularly practical, even if they do come back. Do you have any others? Because in some fights, you use a lot of arrows. Shooting ten and being out for the next hour or two sounds problematic. Especially if it only leaves you with a bent stick and your fists afterwards. I do appreciate the attempt to make sure it isn't overpowered, but for your character's sake, maybe have several normal arrows too, or drop the recharge time a bit. I'd hate for your character to be stuck in a monster fight, and reach back to their quiver, only to find they quickly used all ten arrows in the first few minutes of combat, and now you're up the creek without a paddle.

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Post  Cerulaen on Sat May 31, 2014 5:27 pm

Oh, look at you, Jake, correcting obscure grammar mistakes. I'm so proud. ^.^

I actually don't see why each arrow can't just reappear after a few minutes. That's what Percy's sword does, and it's not OP for him to always have his sword on him. He just would have to make sure he doesn't lose his arrow case. xP It seems practical to me xP
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