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Hunter Gonzales

Post  Curtis on Fri Oct 24, 2014 10:31 pm

(first of all, Hunter is his first name, he's not a hunter. Second, my info such as time in camp and age is as of this post. Third, if this name is taken please message me and I'll think of a new one. Thanks for having patients with me as a new memeber. P.s. my spell check is currently unworking.)

name: Hunter Gonzales

age: recently 13

godly parrent: Athena

mortal family: Carlos Gonzales, hispanic male. Fixes cars for a living and studys fighting technics. He's got black curly hair and black eyes. He's around 5.8 and has a muscular build.

years in camp: zero

history:(He was born in virginia. he is an only child and grew up in a normal house in the suburbs. He questioned his dad about his mom several times but he always got around the answer, he witnessed one monster when he was 11, he saw a cyclobs in walmart but quickly hurried on. He's made some friends at his old school and when he is claimed his dad makes an excuse for his absence. He's been a seemingly trouble maker in school. He went to a few summer camps before and learned to fence.) (his claiming written as a prologue:) As Hunter went to bed on his 13th birthday he fingured the army knife he'd been given by his tio Roberto. As he yawned he knoticed something... floating? Quickly rubbing the sleep from his eyes he stared at the owl head burning above him. In shock he blinked several times to try and comprehend what was happening. Several thoughts came to him at once; I'm already asleep, owls have something to do in Athens, Mr. Simmin's social studies class tought something slightly useful. The floating symbol above his head begun to fade. He started to ask himself if it had been real as he laid down to go to bed... (short vesion from here, he asked his dad about it and he tells him he's a demigod and drives him to the edge of New Jersey and lets him make it from there.I'll post his arrivel at camp half-blood soon)

personality: He tries to be patient, but sometimes snaps. He likes to design humaniod robots and spacecraft. He likes to be energetic and is usually tries to lighten the mood, though he is serious when important things happen. When he gets to camp he'll also: Try to think of really new ways for capture the flag, and try to design some new weapons,

physical appearence: He's got hair darker than most athena blonde kids, but he has the same stormy grey eyes. His hair is also longer (about an inch long hair, long for a boy).  He's around 5.3 and around average build for an 8th grader, (but he's in 7th grade because he got held back)except he's rather skinny.

fatal flows: over confidence, he thinks he can do stuff that are to risky or probably can't, it'll be more fatal when challenged to a much stronger oppenet. and he shows off sometimes, if theres an easier or simplier way to do something he might do all fancy, it'll be bad when some thing needs to be very specific.

talents: climbing, remembering history

weopons: Army knife,

other: he likes cats

(and again if anythings wrong please tell me i am new to the site) (now edited)


Last edited by Curtis on Sat Oct 25, 2014 11:00 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : lack of information)

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Post  GeneralArin on Fri Oct 24, 2014 10:59 pm

Personality didn't get copied over. So go ahead and add that section.

Try and expand on your fatal flaw, it should be a few sentences.

For your history, add a bit about your normal home life too. It's supposed to give a summary of your character's entire life so far.

You don't need to add "as of this post" because the app is just supposed to tell us who/where/how your character is when he joins the story.

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Post  Curtis on Sun Oct 26, 2014 5:55 pm

no one noticed i edited the character, do i need to get it approved now or what?

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Post  GeneralArin on Sun Oct 26, 2014 8:35 pm

It's hard to notice when someone's edited unless it's been looked at constantly. It doesn't automatically shoot us a notice.

Is your Uncle Roberto important in anyway? Since you mentioned his gift in the bio, you should either tell us a bit about your uncle and put his name in the Mortal Family section or just change that to someone already mentioned.

Your personality is drifting into goals and aspirations. Right now, who are you as a person? What is this character like to be around? Obviously, there are some points in time that your character will act outside of their usual personality, but try not to put things like 'patient, though occasionally snaps'. That just sounds contradictory. Generally, how is this person? Outside of their personal interests, how do they act and think? You could also talk about the situations that try your character's patience the most. (And drop the likes, dislikes and goals from the personality. if it's that important, shift it to 'other'.)

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