Krage Sreym

Name: Krage Sreym

Age: 14

God Parent: Athena

Mortal family: Jack Sreym (father), Jess Sreym (step-mother), and Thomas Sreym (step-brother)

Years in camp: new arrival

History:
No matter what Krage tried he didn't fit in at his school in Lakewood, New Jersey. There wasn't anyone else in his grade that was as smart as him, which was saying something since he had skipped two years of elementary. Since he was only 14 and was in his freshman year of highschool he expected the taunting and the name-calling, but what really got him was the fact that his teacher's wouldn't let him take tests by talking. He was failing all of his classes now because of his dyslexia. It had never been a problem in school before, they would ask him the questions and he would answer them. Then they decided that he had to take tests on paper, which didn't work for him.
Krage's dad and my step-mom have been together since he could remember, but they had started arguing about an unknown topic that he was obviously included in. One night his step-mom threatened to leave my dad if he didn't get rid of Krage. So he ran. His bedroom was on the first floor, so he climbed out my window and ran. He didn't take anything with him, which wasn't a very smart idea seeing as he hadn't eaten dinner that evening, but it didn't matter.
It seemed like his feet were moving on their own. Krage just kept running and running, until he saw it. It looked like small village. There was a large, old-looking, blue farmhouse, and there were at least 2 dozen large buildings that were set in the shape of a horseshoe, and there was also a sign. It said "Welcome to Half-Blood Hill".

Physical appearance:
Krage is 5 feet 4 inches, so around average height for males of his age. He has dark blonde hair that reaches just below his shoulders, and eyes are gray. He is fairly skinny, which is strange since he weighs 145. His face is pretty average, so the only thing that really stands out about him is his long hair.

Personality:
Krage is pretty calm most of the time, and doesn't like resorting to violence to accomplish accomplish things. It's pretty easy for him to get along with most people, as long as they don't try to get into a fight with him. Krage doesn't like being in enclosed spaces, but he prefers to be alone. He normally doesn't talk all that much and likes to plan everything out before he does it.

Fatal Flaw: Krage does not communicate well. Because he keep to himself, He sometimes forgets to tell important details to others. Most plans he thinks up won't be fully understood by others because of this, and this should be a warning to anyone who plans on fighting alongside him.

Talents: Krage is a skilled artist. Surprisingly, He doesn't have an understanding of architecture, but instead is skilled at drawing, weaving, and other arts. He can also comprehend the complete meaning of someone's instructions, almost as if he already knows what needs to be done and is simply being reminded.

Weapons: a simple bronze short-sword and shield, as well as a bronze dagger (for emergencies).

Other: He prefers asian food over greek.

Please write in third person point of view. Other than that I don't see anything wrong with this.

Does this work?

Well, I'd say it's okay, but make sure to get another staff member's approval before you start roleplaying.