Addeline Williams

Name: Addeline Williams

Age: 13

Godly Parent: Athena

Mortal Family: Christopher Williams (dad, deceased) and Alexandria Williams (aunt, alive).

Years in Camp: Four

History: Addeline was born on December 1, 2001. She was originally born in Maine, but her father's job, which was painting,made them move to New York. Addeline went to a boarding school for girls(i.e. Ophiuchus's Academy)which was fiercely competetive. Since her Athena genes enabled her to learn more quickly, she became one of the top students. The stress was hard on her because if she got one problem wrong or anything, she would be insulted. It didn't help that she was a general social pariah. One day, she found herself sitting next to her father. He had been in a car accident, and now was in a coma due to a drunk driver. He soon died. She was immediately taken in by her aunt, Alexandria Williams, until her aunt discovered her reading Greek textbooks to herself. Thinking her powers were coming to light, she brought her to camp at nine. When she became ten, she was claimed by Athena.

Physical Appearance: Addeline has amber eyes, and Athena's signature wavy blonde hair usually in a braid. She also has red lips. She is about 4 feet 11 inches with tan skin. Addeline usually wears plaid shirts paired with a pair of jeans or a skirt. She likes putting on a light sheen of pink lip gloss. You can rarely see her in the mortal world without a notebook.

Personality: Addeline aspires to be an author, preferring to lock herself up in her room and write poems or fantasy. She is generally quiet, unless a topic she is passionate about is touched upon. Her humor is a bit morbid and sarcastic, and it's hard to get a smile from her. She loves reading books, especially fiction.  When in an environment with friends, she usually tells her honest opinion and chimes in a word or two, but when she's around strangers, it'll take a force stronger than Chiron to pull her away from her book. Addeline is also a very possessive girl, latching on to what she has. She believes that you should cherish and protect something if you have it, because you probably won't have it very long.

Fatal Flaw: Addeline's fatal flaw is her fear of her home collapsing. If someone threatened to destroy her home unless she would kill blank, then she would willingly do it, no matter if it was a false threat or not. This fear stems from her father dying. She desperately clings to the one home she can have.

Talents:One of her hobbies is to ice skate, while another is to paint. Addeline plays violin and piano, and her only talent she acknowledges is her writing.

Weapons: Addeline generally shies away from close-range weapons, preferring to drop a well-placed Greek Fire bomb instead of clash swords. She favors dart guns and bows, though her first archery lesson ended up with her losing all of the arrows that she could shoot without dropping the bow. She has no weapon of her own, and just grabs one that's on hand.

Other: Her favorite number is zero, and her favorite color is black. She loves looking at delicate things(teacups, glass, etc.) and fabric. She likes to muse about whimsical thoughts.

I don't really have much to comment on your app. I think it looks pretty good.
Normally I don't really like fears as a Fatal flaw, but you explained it so well that I like it as is. It could be that it does feed into more than just one superspecific scenario and affects her thoughts and decisions. Just maybe add some base personality thing that could feed into that flaw, like loyalty or possessiveness, or... some other thing. It just should be somewhat linked to personality.

That's really the only comment I have on it. Good job.

So just that minor thing and I vote approved.
Hold off on posting until another staff member gets their two cents in.

So, I just post it again as a reply?

No, just edit the original post, then add a reply that you adjusted things so we know.

It's edited, and hopefully okay now.

Approved! Sorry for the delay. Have fun roleplaying!

Do I just start roleplaying?

Yup! You can start your own topic, or ask to join someone else's. Although, I don't think there are many active threads right now that you can join, so... I would suggest going for the first option. =P