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Mike Riley

Post  d34dlywolf on Mon Feb 06, 2017 6:44 pm

Name: Mike Riley

Age: 12

God Parent: Apollo

Mortal Family: John Riley(adoptive father) Penny Riley(mom

Years in Camp: literally laying on the ground after tripping and falling down the hill

History: So far life for Mike has been pretty boring. He mostly kept to himself at school, no one bothered him or talked to him. That is until he was caught petting a wolf on the playground. That was the first of many weird things he was caught doing. Years later the sun started to talk to him. At that point, his parents gave up and tried to throw him into a mental instiute. So he ran like any other completely sane insane person would do. He's not quite sure how he found camp half-blood but he's glad he did. Like I said before the sun was talking to him. He's not really sure what's going on at the moment due to the fact that his brand new.

Physical Appearance: Has a couple of burn scars on his arms from cooking. From the checks down his face is spotted with freckles. scar across his left hand from a rapid animal. Bruises up and down his right arm from running away

Personality: He mostly quiet at times, has yet to come out of his shell. Usually calm and collective, observing other. Can't stand the sight of anyone sad or lonely. Always puts other before himself even if he doesn't like that person

Fatal Flaw: This is the same as his greatest strength, to caring. He can't stop himself from being nice to others even if it hurts him. unfortunately, that means he risks everything to help that person. He would literally do anything for others, and that leaves him defenseless and alone at times suffering the conciseness of them getting away and him taking the fall.

Talents: Excellent at surviving, running, and protecting himself and others.

Weapons: All he has at this point is a small karambit he stole from a police officer when he ran.
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Re: Mike Riley

Post  Zach on Tue Feb 14, 2017 1:11 pm

Very good stuff wolf!

NOTE: I am not staff and you don't have to listen to me and I can't approve your application. But I can help if you let me.

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I would like to see a little more all around. It's a pretty solid application. I am curious about the sun talking to Mike. Go into more detail about that experience please.

Again, it's a good app.
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Re: Mike Riley

Post  Axel The Bunny on Tue Feb 28, 2017 11:07 pm

Looks fine with exception of the fatal flaw, how is he too caring? Is he simply naive, too forgiving or trusting? How does this flaw show and how would it be fatal?
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