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New here Creating character

Post  Alizziebeth on Sun Apr 16, 2017 2:49 pm

Name Alizziebeth (Lizza) Oakwood

Age: 13

God Parent: HEKATE (Hecate)  goddess of magic, witchcraft, the night,  ghosts and necromancy.

Mortal Family:  Hunter Oakwood (Father) Maria (Sister)

Years in Camp: 2


Physical Appearance:  I have reddish brown hair, Green eyes and cream colored skin, I am 5'2.

Personality:  I am loyal, blunt(get used to it) and strong headed. I am extremely bad at subtle hints but I easily accept anyone as my friend and will defend them just don't get on my nerves... I have a long fuse but when I want payback it comes... hard

Fatal Flaw: My fatal flaw when I believe in something I often forget to think about other peoples point of view and how they take things it often causes fights because of my bluntness and beliefs.


Talents: Swimming, Art, Magic.

Weapons: Magic, Bow and Arrow, Sword


Alizziebeth

Posts : 1
Drachmae : 3
Join date : 2017-04-16

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Re: New here Creating character

Post  Catryn Greyling on Sun Apr 16, 2017 8:49 pm

I'm going to have to ask you to change everything from first person to third person point of view. You're also missing the history section. When you've added that in, bump the topic and we'll give it another look.

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