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A new application for Megan Shard has been made. please go there for references.
Last edited by Lily on Thu Mar 07, 2013 3:04 am; edited 1 time in total
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I think you're missing the personality section. Either that or I am...
The rest looks good, though.
The rest looks good, though.
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Not cool Lily!!!
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What i hd to do it on my phone so no copy and paste!!!!
Anyway...
Personality:Megan is strong headed and extremely stubborn. No one can convince her ekasily, unless if you use the fact that she tends to hold grudges and project jelousity at others. For that fact she did not make a good friend in mortal schools, but at campp, do the right things, and she may be the best friends you've got.
EDIT:Megan's snake is Dauntless now xD
Anyway...
Personality:Megan is strong headed and extremely stubborn. No one can convince her ekasily, unless if you use the fact that she tends to hold grudges and project jelousity at others. For that fact she did not make a good friend in mortal schools, but at campp, do the right things, and she may be the best friends you've got.
EDIT:Megan's snake is Dauntless now xD
Last edited by Lily on Sat Feb 02, 2013 9:41 pm; edited 1 time in total
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It looks fine but I just have a problem with Lily being her archenemy. With that, it kinda makes it to where you fight yourself and that leads to a lot of monologues.
I know that in my case, Kris and Kat have a something out for each other but they don't really fight each other because it would just get boring to type after a while.
I know that in my case, Kris and Kat have a something out for each other but they don't really fight each other because it would just get boring to type after a while.
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Looks good to me, but try and avoid fighting yourself. If you've got a buddy, then they can jump in the middle to help you out as a justified way to avoid the self-fighting.
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By the way, you're approved if that was the only concern.
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Oh of course i wouldnt have them fight each other. Megan wants to kill a the campers, but Lily escpecially. I'll only RP them together if i get extremely bored.
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