Theo Addison
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Theo Addison
Name: Theo Addison
Age: 14
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Family: Thomas Addison, Angela Addison
Years in Camp: 4
Brief History: Theo grew up with his father and younger sister Tessa in Baltimore. He went to camp Half-Blood at ten. He remained undetermined for nine days before being claimed by Athena. He practiced very much with short spear. his sister was adopted and remained home.
Physical Appearance: Theo has longish, slightly curly blonde hair and silver eyes. He usually dresses in yellow jeans and any shirt. He is about 5' 8" and 140 pounds. He is missing part (the last knuckle to fingertip) of his left ring finger from being bitten off by a hellhound.
Personality: Theo laughs and jokes a lot. He is accepting and good natured. He is willing to try almost anything. He treats everyone like a friend. He also is polite and respecting to elders. He sends letters home once a week.
Fatal Flaw: Bad judgement. He will fight stuff even if he cant win. He makes bad decisions.
Talents: He is near perfect at reading expressions.
Weapons: Short spear that is enchanted to never break or chip and return to his hand when he throws it.
Other:
Age: 14
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Family: Thomas Addison, Angela Addison
Years in Camp: 4
Brief History: Theo grew up with his father and younger sister Tessa in Baltimore. He went to camp Half-Blood at ten. He remained undetermined for nine days before being claimed by Athena. He practiced very much with short spear. his sister was adopted and remained home.
Physical Appearance: Theo has longish, slightly curly blonde hair and silver eyes. He usually dresses in yellow jeans and any shirt. He is about 5' 8" and 140 pounds. He is missing part (the last knuckle to fingertip) of his left ring finger from being bitten off by a hellhound.
Personality: Theo laughs and jokes a lot. He is accepting and good natured. He is willing to try almost anything. He treats everyone like a friend. He also is polite and respecting to elders. He sends letters home once a week.
Fatal Flaw: Bad judgement. He will fight stuff even if he cant win. He makes bad decisions.
Talents: He is near perfect at reading expressions.
Weapons: Short spear that is enchanted to never break or chip and return to his hand when he throws it.
Other:
Last edited by Eustace on Sat Jan 26, 2013 4:02 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : needed to change fatal flaw and the sister)
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Re: Theo Addison
Hey admins! If you guys want to look at my brother's post, that would be cool...
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Re: Theo Addison
I'm not sure how the twin sister thing will go unless that's another player in the rp that I'm just oblivious to. If it is referencing another player, than ignore this. If it's not, then you'll be seen without her a lot since you can only have one character.
I guess it's a minimum that passes. It's really short, but I guess it hits the major points.
The fatal flaw feels short. Well it is, but I mean too short.
Well, my two cents is: It doesn't get exceptional marks, but I think it hits everything that's necessary.... I at least can't think of what to add/fix.
(Though I'd watch the twin thing.)
Wait for another Admin to look over this.
I guess it's a minimum that passes. It's really short, but I guess it hits the major points.
The fatal flaw feels short. Well it is, but I mean too short.
Well, my two cents is: It doesn't get exceptional marks, but I think it hits everything that's necessary.... I at least can't think of what to add/fix.
(Though I'd watch the twin thing.)
Wait for another Admin to look over this.
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Re: Theo Addison
I changed the fatal flaw and the twin sister thing.I also changed the weapon slightly. Hope you like it.
Last edited by Eustace on Sat Jan 26, 2013 4:04 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : mistaken message)
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