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Post  Lucas Vega Sat Apr 27, 2013 1:33 am

Name: Lucas Vega
Age: 14
God Parent: Hermes
Mortal Family: Samantha Perks (Mom) Grady Perks (Step-dad) [Lucia Vega, is twin sister, also a child of Hermes obviously.]
Years in Camp: 3

Brief History: Lucas's mom met Hermes on a trip to New Zealand. No surprise there, since Hermes is the god of traveling. Hermes stayed with Samantha until the twins were born. He was ever so delighted to have to kids at once. Yay. More servants. Lucas and Lucia had rather routine lives. They are from Vermont. They went to school with other kids. Many of which they were kicked out of for stealing and pranking. They loved their parents. They had friends. But all that changed when the Fire Nation attacked. Meaning Cyclopes, a (the?) Chimera, and the like. Samantha was killed in the attack in a blast of flame from the Chimera. Grady drove them to Camp Halfblood. Both twins suffer from brief nervous breaks and nightmares where they observe their mother's death over and over. At camp, Lucas goofed off often and has been reprimanded multiple times by Chiron. Lucia took things to seriously and again found others shying away from her a bit. They both excelled in areas of training involving stealth. Lucas’s weakness was planning and strategy while Lucia’s was hand-to-hand combat. They have only been on one minor quest, and that was only to retrieve something Chiron dropped in New York City.

Physical Appearance: Wiry. Light blonde hair and grey eyes. About 5'8". Pale skin. He has a nice scar on his right cheek from where Lucia whacked him with a wrench. Slightly crooked nose from a break after stealing a big kid's pocket knife; basically the kid found out and slugged Lucas in the face.

Personality: Lucas is quite mischievous. He loves pranks and stealing things. He likes to comfort and/or encourage people when he can. He has no ill-will towards anyone. He has a slightly oversized ego from his exuberant personality attracting many friends at his old school.

Fatal Flaw: He's too reliant on his twin, Lucia. If she ever got hurt, he would be incapacitated, mentally.

Talents: Flawless teamwork when fighting with Lucia. Also he has a very fine touch at setting traps (generally used for pranks) and at lock-picking. Grady calls him "Keys," because he may as well give him some.

Weapons: Two long knives and a two foot length of chain with a heavy metal ball on one end, and a hook
where it connects with Lucia's chain on the other end.

Other: Lucas wants to be Co-Counselor for Hermes cabin.


Last edited by Lucas Vega on Mon May 13, 2013 2:49 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Post  Guest Sat Apr 27, 2013 9:04 am

Same with your twin sis, length. Try to describe things more like maybe describing how he got his crooked nose in the history section.

BTW sorry about the in between lag. My midterms are days away. I cant afford to fail them.

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Post  Lucas Vega Sat Apr 27, 2013 3:55 pm

I totally understand. I feel the same. How's that look?
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Post  Guest Sat Apr 27, 2013 5:32 pm

I'd say still needs a few more. Why don't you go get a look at others to see how it's like?

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Post  Lucas Vega Sun Apr 28, 2013 6:08 pm

Gotcha. It's updated. By the way, I think that Xavier got by on less. scratch Razz
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Post  Zach Sun Apr 28, 2013 6:12 pm

That's a good point. Also, I don't want to step over any bounds or undermine Lily's authority or anything, but I like the app.
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Post  Guest Mon Apr 29, 2013 2:47 am

Yeah well im human too.......but really lets see what the admins say first i just wanted to give you sth to do until the admins got on the 'puter.

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Post  GeneralArin Tue Apr 30, 2013 7:55 pm

lol, well after a while of being around we tend to get higher expectations. It gets hard to remember that not everyone has very fleshed out characters. And how busy also effects things. XP

Well, back to buisness.

You've been a camper for five years?

To put that in perspective, Jake and Lily, both senior campers, have been at camp for five years. It also would have required you being nine years old upon admittance to camp.
First, being at camp that long would require some personal thing about what you've been doing over the past few years: the sort of impact you make, the experience you've had, improvements, etc.
Second, the nine years old thing is a bit off-putting.
You're going to have to defend that a bit, or just change it.


The rest I'll let by, it looks alright. Just that main part.
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Post  Lucas Vega Tue Apr 30, 2013 9:05 pm

Wasn't Annabeth six when she joined?
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Post  GeneralArin Tue Apr 30, 2013 9:11 pm

How many other six year olds do you see joining?
The usual age is 12 to 13, an age where people are technically capable of really doing things on their own.
Anything below 11 is unusual, and would make you a special case.
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Post  Lucia Vega Tue Apr 30, 2013 9:13 pm

My theory is that the double Half-blood scent drew monsters early and they had to run for it.
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Post  GeneralArin Tue Apr 30, 2013 9:15 pm

Hmm. A good point, but there's still the senior camper matter. Why don't you tell a bit of camp life and what sort of camper you are, and we'll see.
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Post  Lucas Vega Tue Apr 30, 2013 9:17 pm

Alright. Razz
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Post  Lucas Vega Wed May 01, 2013 7:14 pm

Mine's updated too. I copy/pasted Lucia's Razz
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Post  Lucas Vega Mon May 13, 2013 2:54 pm

This is Lucia. I just changed both of ours. It's handy to have your twin's login credentials.
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Post  GeneralArin Mon May 13, 2013 3:04 pm

Approved.
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