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Heather Heartsly

Post  Hogmea on Wed Jan 22, 2014 12:34 pm

Name:Heather Brandy Heartly

Age: 12 years old

God Parent: Heather is the daughter of Heacate

Mortal Family: Marty Heartly is her mortal father, Heather also has two younger mortal siblings Justine and James who are twins. Mary Heartly is her stepmother.

Years in Camp: New camper

Brief History: Marty meets Hecate while out partying at a bar to celebrate the win of his most prized horse Battle Star. A few months later she leaves the baby with the foreman and told him to give the child and the note attached to Marty. Marty is a rich man who loves Heather deeply, he teaches her everything about horses and even gives her one of her own. When she is eight years old her father meets a young woman named Mary who has her own two children who are twins a boy James and a girl Justine.

Heather at first is determined to hate the new additions to the family but learns to love them as Mary shows her what she had always longed for, Mary treats Heather as like one of her own children. Heather got what ever she wanted in life, if she wanted a new bike, it was hers. She had her own indoor pool, her own science lab for she was very much a science freak, she loved mixing different ingrediants and trying them on test animals to see what happened. She made several experiments that caused things like blindness, and hair loss. She even made an experiment that allowed the drinker to be invisible but wears off after 20 minutes. Her goal was to create one that would last longer than 20 minutes. These creations came about as accidents, like the blindness experiment she had made came about when she accidentally added a bit of black car oil to the ingredients, some of it had driped into the rat cage that she had on her desk table, and she had been quite shocked to see it running around and raming into everything, she had tried a few tests and found that she had made something that could cause blindness, seeing it as something useful she bottled it and made more. The invisibility happened when one of her little brothers broke into the lab and spilled a little powdered sugar from a donut on one of her experiments, she hadn't noticed the little white powder until she tried it on a test animal a cat actually and couldn't find it afterwards but was able to hear the purrs of the animal in front of her, it wore off after 20 minutes. She had no idea how it had been possible but she totally liked the way her experiments were going and had started experimenting with other things that she would ordinarily ignore.

All her meals were served to her by servants and she had a butler that manned the doorway, a body gaurd that was there to protect her. The strange thing was the body guard was not much of a body guard to her, he was crippled and wore a hat all the time. The only thing she ever saw the body guard eat was a salad that was made only of vegetables. She figured he was probably a vegitarian. Her horse Calamity was a beautiful Maple brown horse with very fast legs. She rode the mare in several races and had won every single one of them.

She ate of of fine china and had only the best foods like creme brulee, caviar, truffles, ice cream, Fois Gras, Expensive booze, Exotic meats, Smoked salmon, expensive cheese, sushi anything that was expensive, they had a cook that cooked everything for them, they had partys, galas, and balls. She had a maid that dressed her, that bathed her, that made and cleaned her bed, she even had the maid go shopping for her. The only time she was allowed outside was if her butler was with her. She never had to babysit her stepsiblings as that was done by a hired baby nurse, just as she was taken care of by a baby nurse, She had all the best toys, books, and even the most expensive tutor to teach her reading, math, science and everything else. She got so bored in the house where all the maids and servants did everything for her, that was how she started working in a labortory everything she did down there she insisted upon doing herself.

On her twelth birthday she went down to the field to ride her horse, when she found her body guard already standing outside the gate holding the reigns of the horse while sitting astride another, "my lady please get on your horse, you must leave this place now, you are in danger, you are not safe here." he told her forcefully.

She trusted her bodyguard so she did as she was instructed and rode beside him on her horse, "Were are we going Mr. Apricot?" "I am taking you to Camp Halfblood, that is the only place on this world that you will be safe. You must trust me every step of the way and do as I instruct you, if I tell you to run, I want you to run, do not wait or worry about me just get as far away as you can." he told her.

Heather nodded instently. They rode hard for several hours when he yelled at her "go no, fly, get out of here now." fear was in his eyes, so she didn't have to be told twice, she nudged Calamity into full speed and was soon flying down the hill, but then amazingly just as what ever was behind her was getting close to her, she felt the horse give another burst of speed, this almost felt like another race only this time it was a race for her life. If she wasn't in so much danger she would have thought it was fun, but at the moment she was so scared that she was just ready be gone and was worried that her horse may not cut it.  She looked back and saw a big creature with one eye chasing them. When they finally reached an arch way in the wooded area she saw that her body gaurd was already waiting for her. They stopped in front of him and she saw him look at her in relief. "good your safe, come on you must get in here now." he ordered and pulled her into the archway where she found herself at a camp.

"What is this place?" she asked noticing the hustle and bustly in almost looked like a greek renessance festival or something, all the people in armor and carrying weapons and looking like war heros or something.
"Heather this is camp halfblood, this is the only place safe for you, for you are a demigod or halfblood if you prefer. One of your parents was a goddess! which one I am not sure but with your knack for science I would think Athena. But then he stared at something over her head a pair of torches standing over her head, "it looks like you have just been claimed by your mother! I seems like you are the daughter of Hecate!" he explained carefully.

Physical Appearance: Heather has a narrow, oblong face with angular cheekbones and a pointed chin. Her slit-like eyes are a clouded hazel, and her thinly plucked eyebrows are shaped into a deceivingly perfect arch that followed the slight curve of her eye. A long nose hooked over continually pursed lips, which were painted a bright red in an unsuccessful effort to mask their natural thinness. long black hair, lush and healthy looky that fell to her back. The sharp features of Heather's face was a  mere  reflection of her entire body structure, and everything—from her buff arms and well excercised legs screamed rich girl. She walks in long strides, her shoulders back and face held forward, wearing tall stiletto heels and a bold leopard-print mini-dress with lots of Jewlery.

Personality: Heather is well mannered, She is a very kindhearted person not the usual rich girl snob you usually get, a snob thinks she is better than every one else at everything. She loves making friends with people, after having only her family or servants to talk to she is practically starving for attention for kids her own age. But in some ways she still has a silver spoon in her mouth, when she wants something she will use her rich girl attitude to get it.

Fatal Flaw: Heather's fatal flaw is her arragance, she believes that her magic will protect her from everything and that makes her very arrogant, she spends to much time boasting to her enemies about how good she is a magic that even if she managed to hide herself in the mist her own mouth would get her caught. She feels that because she can manipulate the mist so that others won't see her or anyone around her that they can't touch her.

Talents: Creating potions, manipulation the mist!

Weapons: Potions!
Other: .


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Re: Heather Heartsly

Post  ©razy Dude on Wed Jan 22, 2014 8:29 pm

The Pegasus thing will have to be discussed with an Admin. It could probably be done but since she's a demigod it would be somewhat difficult.

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Post  Hogmea on Wed Jan 22, 2014 9:14 pm

don't they have a stable full of pegasus at Camp Halfblood? wouldn't that make them rather common?

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Post  ©razy Dude on Wed Jan 22, 2014 10:36 pm

But to hide it from a demigod for 3 years without her noticing a thing is strange. It'd be different if she saw thing or noticed it is all I'm saying. And plus they're free spirited so it probably wouldn't stay in one area for that amount of time.
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Post  Hogmea on Thu Jan 23, 2014 11:00 am

possibly, unless it was hidden by the mist, and I thought in the books they kept pegasus in the stables?

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Post  GeneralArin on Thu Jan 23, 2014 4:35 pm

I'd only find the not seeing it through the mist when you can manipulate it as a dubious point, but it's hard to see through an illusion you didn't know was an illusion. And she could have also been tricking herself into seeing what she expected to see.

My main issue is how you gave a very detailed Bio, but only a short personality and fatal flaw.

For one, the personality only describes the surface details. She's polite, nice and wants to be 'normal', eg. Not rich. Try and add a bit more depth into it, like how she tends to relate to people, problems, and what she thinks of herself.

Then try and expand the fatal flaw a bit. Why would she be slow? Would she just consistently underestimate her opponent? Would she think they wouldn't dare fight her to begin with? Does she think she's faster than she really is?

(And as a side-thought, Arrogant and being a 'rich snob' tend to go hand in hand. You'll have to explain how they don't or change one of them.)


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We normally require an older camper, around 12 or 13, just to keep the ages about the same.

The science lab is a bit iffy, since making an invisible brew is impossible for normal science. Unless you're actually making potions, but don't know its science. (Since magic is acceptable. Technically.)

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Post  Hogmea on Sat Feb 01, 2014 1:30 am

I have tried to correct it and am still waiting for somebody to approve it!

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Post  GeneralArin on Sat Feb 01, 2014 1:53 am

Sorry about that.

It looks better. Approved.

And I guess Andrew said okay before, you're good to go. Welcome to the site.

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