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Willow Adelyin NiPhorian

Post  Willow NiPhorian on Mon Oct 12, 2015 10:46 am

Name: Willow Adelyin NiPhorian

Age: 12

God Parent: Khione  (Mother)

Mortal Family: Greyson NiPhorian (Father), Maylee Hosp-NiPhorian (Step-Mother), Joshua Hosp-NiPhorian (Half-Brother), and Daisy Hosp-NiPhorian (Step-Sister)

Years in Camp: 2 1/2

History: Willow was 10 years old when she was sent to camp. Before that, her mother had supposedly disappeared and left her with her reckless and somewhat abusive father. He later remarried to Maylee Hosp, a sweet and humble women that Willow adored. She had previously had a 15 year old daughter named Daisy. Daisy was bitter and Dark, so Willow was a neutral sided sister with her. Maylee had a son with Greyson (Father), named Joshua. Joshua was blind and very quiet, but he was very loud when he was with Willow, considering such a tight bond they had. Willow was later diagnosed with early depression, ADHD, and Schizophrenia. When Greyson was sent to jail for abuse towards Maylee, Daisy, Josh, and Willow were all sent into foster care. Daisy was in a separate home, while Willow and Josh stayed together for about a year before Willow turned 10 and they were separated also. Willow became very depressed and lasted only 2 months in this home before she was taken into Camp Half-Blood. Since she's arrived at camp, she has being staying quiet and kept to herself. When playing in the games, she would climb in a tree and stay there. When someone would talk to her, she would nod and answer politely.
Willow continually thinks about her family. Even though she likes food, she would give all of her food to the gods and eat very rarely.  

Physical Appearance: Bright Red hair down to her shoulders in two side braids, dark brown eyes, very pale, light freckles, usually shivering, white shorts overalls with a baby blue sweater and white canvas shoes. Despite how she rolled around in all kinds of dirt, she always managed to keep her white clothing white. She is 5 foot 1 inch, and weighs 97 pounds.

Personality: She is very shy and humble at first. She is usually mumbling to herself and shouting at air to leave her alone. Willow can be very funny and sarcastic when she is around loved ones or close friends. She loves to take risks and climb things, but can get very paranoid that someone will push her off. She feels unloved and lonely a lot. She is very generous and good-natured, unlike the stories she was told of her mother. She is a flexible and agile person, but may get light-headed easily. Willow can be extremely cruel, but not snobby. She will never say what she thinks about a unkind person.

Fatal Flaw: She only observes. Willow likes to keep to herself and watch from a distance. She tends to wish she could be in the group. This causes her to not be of use and make herself feel like a burden. She is too nervous to get into the battle or conversation unless absolutely necessary. Willow tends to space off when alone, so if she is in a serious battle or war she could easily be killed.

Talents: Willow can draw extremely well. She loves to sew quilts for others to keep warm during winter. She can cook fairly well for a 12 year old and likes to write poetry. She wanted to be a paramedic or brain surgeon, so she knows a few things about handling wounds and illnesses.

Weapons: Willow is absolutely okay with a bow and a knife, in fact, that is pretty much all that she uses. During battle, she will stay in trees and use her bow, and if someone finds her, she will immediately begin to stab them repeatedly. At times she will get very upset and turn paler than usual, and her fingertips may begin to turn blue from sudden frostbite. At serious times, little flakes of white may fall around her.

Other:
Willow loves to eat. Food is probably her life.

She carries around a doll at times that people may find creepy. The doll is porcelain with golden curls and bright blue eyes. It is very old and was given to her by her grandmother just before she died. She calls her, ¨Angel¨ becauses he believes she is her guardian and punishes the voices for being so cruel.

Willow does not like cats very much, but she respects them very much. They remind her of herself.

Willow is unclaimed and honestly does not wish to know who her mother is. Even though she knows she will find out eventually, she wants her mother to feel guilty for leaving her with her abusive father. She has a small feeling she knows who it is, and may seek for more information if provoked.

She wishes to be able to help in the infirmary.


Last edited by RayaLi on Mon Oct 12, 2015 12:49 pm; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : Needed to fix something)
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Post  Axel The Bunny on Mon Oct 12, 2015 11:35 am

two major things: first since you've been in camp add a brief summary of her time at camp, what has she been doing? this is mostly to make inserting her into the RP easier.

second is your fatal flaw...a Fatal Flaw must be a single personality trait that is dominant in her and could cause her death. Schizophrenia is a hereditary psychological condition. There fore im gonna have to ask youu to change your fatal flaw because of that.

Everything else seems fine so fix those and you should be good
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Post  Willow NiPhorian on Mon Oct 12, 2015 12:51 pm

How is the observing fatal flaw? I put in how it could affect her and get her seriously hurt. I only put Schizophrenia because I actually have it and it affects me in ways I thought it should affect Willow. Her doll is a way of comforting her.
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Post  Axel The Bunny on Mon Oct 12, 2015 12:59 pm

It sounds alright, to me, approved.
Wait for another staff to comment, I'll send em your way when someone get on.
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Post  Willow NiPhorian on Mon Oct 12, 2015 2:58 pm

Okay, thank you!
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Post  Catryn Greyling on Tue Oct 13, 2015 11:37 pm

My only question is why couldn't Maylee keep taking care of Willow, Josh, and Daisy after Willow's dad went to prison? She didn't have enough money to provide for all of them? Other than that, the app looks great, so I'll approve it right now, and if you want to add that detail in, go ahead, but it's not necessary. Welcome to the site, and enjoy roleplaying!
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Post  Catryn Greyling on Thu Oct 15, 2015 1:01 am

*tries to gently bump topic but trips and falls over*
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