Alyss Sundovin

WES IM FINALLY MAKING MY CHARACTER. ARE YOU PROUD OF ME.

Name: Alyss Sundovin

Age: 16

God Parent: Hades

Mortal Family: Mother - Jamie Sundovin

Years in Camp: 4

Brief History: She grew up with her mother, who is a semi-famous landscape artist, until she was twelve. At that age a satyr came and brought her to camp where she learned of her father and his 'eccentric' family. She only visits camp during the summer, and comes back home for school and to see her mother.

Physical Appearance: 5"3 with short black hair and dark green eyes. Her limbs are very thin.

Personality: Shes loyal to friends and is a cheerful person. Although shes very sarcastic and cynical at times, shes really friendly and gets along with most people. If she sees someone in trouble, she'll help if she can. Shes a thinker, and tends to zone out if you're not able to hold her attention.

Fatal Flaw: Shes got a sassy mouth. She'll be sarcastic and taunting to the point where her own allies might want to shut her up! Shes also so deadpan about it that its hard to tell if shes joking.

Talents: Sarcastic Comments, Pencil Sketches

Weapons: A simple Sword and Dagger combo

Other: Her dagger is made of Stygian Iron

we aren't really doing 18 year olds at camp because it makes it difficult to continually rp with the character.

So is like 16 good then

Yeah that's fine.

Can you add more to the bio. Rule of thumb is atleast 4 sentences but I prefer more because it gives other more to work with about your character.

Explain more of the fatal flaw. Give more depth to it and how it would really affect performance in battle or in life.

Give more to appearance, like what type of clothes she like to wear or what her style is.