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Post  Guest on Fri Apr 12, 2013 6:03 am

Name: Anubis "Jay" Kyl
Age: 15
God Parent:Hades
Mortal Family: Lia Kyl, Luke and Kaitlyn Garner
Years in Camp: 1 (This is his second.)
Brief History: Lia Kyl was a good woman at heart, but had to cope with a lot of stress. Her parents pestered her to get married, and her boyfried had dumped her for another girl. Everyone around her seemed to die, too- a close colleague was killed ina car crash, and even her two fish, Maca and Roni, were accidentally flished down the toilet.(She was devastated.) This led her to stray onto the path of alchohol and drugs.
Lia met Hades in Ireland while ona a vacation trip. She shared her bitterness and sadness, and they soon fell. In love. Than Jay was born in Dublin, after the Egyptian god of death, Anubis.
Shortly afterwards, Hades had to leave, tossing Lia into far more depression. She went back to her homeland, and died of drug addiction when Jay was only 6. He was put into an orphanage for 2 years, luckily one of the better ones. He was then adopted by Kaitlyn and Luke Garner, but dodn't change his last name; it was one of the only connections to his past.
Anyways, Jay was homeschooled by his new parents in the US. Luke was an architect, and Kaitlyn a psychologist. Of course, he was taught other subjects, too. Then at age 10, they decided that Jay needed to spend time with kids his age and sent him to a public school.That was around the time his powers began to show. He had various nicknames, all based on the way he handled lockers and his namesake, Anubis. But he didn't really care. But everybody called him "Jay". He had no idea how this started, but it strangely suited him, and ao he began to call himself Jay.
It went this way for a few years-getting bullied, hanging with friends-a normal life. But during those years,he began to see things that weren't there.. Or were they? Ghosts and spirits. He could sense it if someone died recently. He was overwhelmed by this "sixth sense" and very nearly passed out ona a field trip to the cementery. Then when Jay was going on 13, he suspected he wasn't excactly..mortal. At this time, he was intrigued in Greek myths,and couldn't help but wonder if the gods were real. Like that, he became closer and closer to his real identity, and the demigpd odor became stronger, luring monsters to his home. One day, the creatures stormed the house. The family survived, but Mister, a satyr desguised as Jay's best friend, died helping them. He left a note to the Garners, revealing Jay's true self, but it was a year later that Jay was sent to CHB. Surprisingly, the Garners didn't disown him.

Physical Appearance: Jay has dark hair and chocolate brown eyes. He has a nice smile- not excactly a popular expression for children of Hades, but true nonetheless. He wears T shirts and jeans, and has a silver skull ring that turns into Iceflame, a stygian iron sword. Sometimes he carries around a foldable black skateboard. Has a mischievous glint in his eyes.

Personality: He's a rather easygoing guy. He doesn't always agree on how his dad treats people, so he tries his best to be nice. However, he has a quite direct list of people on his good/bad side, and shows it if he dislikes someone. He is very protective of his friends and has a sarcastic wit that he develops in strange situations. He can get very serious in dire situations,and is unpredictable in many ways, hard to rein in. Not a bad guy, in general.

Fatal Flaw: Grudges. It can affect his judgement fatally. For example, when he's in combat with someone who he had a grudge on, even if it's just practice, he might make fatal injuries. Or he can be easily baited into a fight because of his grudges.

Talents: Jay can do most things other Hades kids can do. He can summon bones/ghosts, and make certain kinds of metals obey his will.(Like the metal used in locker doors, for instance.) He can shadow travel, but only a few times a day. He can speak languages of creatures of the Underworld. For now..let's see how he copes with passing out after more than 2 shadow travels. He's good at swordsplay and has a knack for finding ways to escape.

Weapons: He has Iceflame, a stygian iron sword that can turn into a silver ring. It gives out a cold aura.

Other: He loves to listen to music on his phone- all kinds of music is stored there. He tends to underestimate himself a bit. He's not so good at hiding his feelings.


To be continued


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Re: Anubis "Jay" Kyl

Post  Lily on Fri Apr 12, 2013 7:24 am

Well, i like your choice for olympian parent but the length of your application won't get you anywhere near approval. I understand that you are working on it but you need to make that hisyory of yours longer. Especially for a big three child.
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Post  Guest on Sat Apr 13, 2013 6:40 am

Is this enough?

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Post  Lily on Sat Apr 13, 2013 6:45 am

Yep. Want me to tell the admins?((i'm only a mod, so I can only critique yours))
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Post  Guest on Sat Apr 13, 2013 7:25 am

Yeah,sure. This is my first time in a RPG forum, so if you could tell me what to fix, that'd be appreciated.

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Post  Lily on Sat Apr 13, 2013 7:42 am

Mmaky I'll get them Very Happy

but before I do-
develop that fatal flaw. I know grudges are fatal flaws for Hades kids. That doesnt't spare you from wrting it short. Explain how his flaw could cloud his judgement. Try to explain his flaw in a more detailed fashion.

And:I don't know how we staff feel about his name......we try to make this site Greek related only.
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Post  Guest on Sat Apr 13, 2013 7:57 am

The flaw's fixed, but can I keep the name? Besides, everybody calls him Jay anyways..

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Post  Lily on Sat Apr 13, 2013 8:16 am

Well, let's see how the admins respond.
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Post  GeneralArin on Sat Apr 13, 2013 1:35 pm

Eh, I see nothing wrong with the name. It's just a name, it's not like he's actually related to anything Anubis. Some parents just like exotic names.

And wow you really fleshed it out a lot more than the last time I glanced at it...

It looks great. You did a good job fleshing out your character.

I say approved.

Either Wes or Kris need to put their two cents in, and then you're good.

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Post  Lily on Sat Apr 13, 2013 1:36 pm

Well p stupid me.Razz
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Post  GeneralArin on Tue Apr 16, 2013 11:21 am

Since it's been three days, I'll go ahead and let you be approved. If Wes or Kris find something wrong, you'll have to come back and fix it.

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Post  Guest on Wed Apr 17, 2013 3:58 am

Oh, thanks.

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