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Aurora Jaymes

Post  Aurora on Mon Apr 30, 2012 7:49 pm

Name: Aurora Marie Jaymes (First name in Greek: αυγή)
Age:15
God Parent:Aphrodite
Mortal Family: Xavier Jaymes
Years in Camp:Just arrived
Brief History: Xavier was a famous movie star who was in motion picture referring romance and super hero characters and also played evil villains and was considered one of the best actors for action movies at the time. Until he was attracted to Aphrodite the Goddess of Love and beauty. Her beauty caught him off guard and she bore him child name Aurora meaning dawn in Greek. Xavier wasn't angry though but he kept her a secret from his fans and said she was his niece. She was very beautiful as she grew and was very knowledgeable with Greek myths her favorite Goddess though Hera. She saw Hera as a mother in Greece. At the last day of school, was the end of her rich life. She was taken to camp by her father and was in a terrible car crash into a cliff the cause of it was a monster. She swam to safety bring her father with him. Xavier told her to leave him and he'd get away from the monster by himself. She wasn't sure by that, her weapon was a pole pipe. She unfortunately had to leave and say goodbye. She was in Manhattan and was traveling in a car she found with the keys in it. She drove off once the car ran out of gas she started to stalk around in the forest fighting monster and getting brutal wounds on her arms and legs. She passed out right at the hill.
Physical Appearance: Long layered brown thick hair and green eyes that change color from green-blue-brown. Slim figure. Height:About 5'4" 1/2 but in her black boots 5'7". Weight:About 115.6. Normally wears a leather jacket,jeans and a flower blouse. Black boots hair usually in a pig tails but other then that her hair is down at times. Bangs cover the face.
Personality: She seems very normal though she isn't considered happy she doesn't like being rich. She is known to be dark and mysterious never letting her friends and even family get arms length from her. She feels that her friends are only her friends for her being rich and her famous father. She only trust the people she knows for years and doesn't seem to trust anyone. She runs off from embarrassment and doesn't like make overs strange for a daughter of Aphrodite but hates other movie stars other then her father. She is secretive and a angry person. Inside she's just plain miserable.
Fatal Flaw: Tons but her main one is not able to trust. She doesn't trust anyone including what she can do to her friends and family. She blocks everyone out and pushes most of everyone away from her.
Talents:Very good artist. Sometimes draws cool prints on her arms with pen.
Weapons: Kopis dagger
Other:
Pet beagle names Clove (not at camp)


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Post  GeneralArin on Mon Apr 30, 2012 8:26 pm

I was getting a lot of "Piper-reskin" vibes from this application.
This is a good, well detailed character.
My main concern (besides the initial worry that this will be very similar to Piper) is the dog. Is said dog at camp?

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Post  Aurora on Mon Apr 30, 2012 8:28 pm

No dog at camp should I tweak the History she's nothing like Piper believe me. But I tweaked the history of her instead mostly all the people Aphrodite falls for is superstars and other people who are famous.
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Post  GeneralArin on Mon Apr 30, 2012 11:11 pm

Well, after reading it more, I saw that it moved away from the Piper-like.
Alright, those two were my only concerns.
Wait for another Admin to comment, and you'll be approved.

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Post  Aurora on Mon Apr 30, 2012 11:31 pm

Cool.
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Post  Wes on Tue May 01, 2012 5:30 pm

Looks good to me, Approved. Smile

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